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Laughing

and more laughing

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Comment from MAMONIA
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You did a great job for this contest and many will agree.
That's a great shot you got to image your words.
You had me laughing too.

Best of luck in the contest.

Marie

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2021

reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021
    Thanks, Marie!
    I think there are only a few of us on FS who think similarly, although I cannot understand why.
Comment from Zan Zan
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The one and only vice pressi.

The pic up top lived up to my imagination. I could picture her @ a press conference saying this LOL.

~Five stars~

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2021

reply by the author on 12-Jun-2021
    thanks for the 5 stars.
    Yep, she's a doozy
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I'm not sure who this lady is, but she certainly looks happy and is enjoying a good laugh, your poem paid tribute to her here, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2021

reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
    This is America's Vice President who Biden put in charge of our border crisis, who has never gone down there, has done nothing about it and when a reported finally asked her why she hadn't gone, she said she hadn't ever been to Europe either, and why was he making such a big deal out of it and laughed. she laughs at everything. A total embarrassment. When she ran for President, she got 1% of the vote. And Biden keeps forgetting he's President! He said that on TV today. quite a pair.
    Thanks, Dolly, I'm hoping Kamala's laughing will count for the humor for this piece.
Comment from Carlos' girl
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Wow this is a greatbentry for the contest, you really nailed it my friend. I like the reference to Oprah, Im the King etc etc. So funny. Good rhymes to

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2021

reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
    thank you so much!! Could you tell I was/am a smidge disgusted??
reply by Carlos' girl on 10-Jun-2021
    Oh yes, Yes i could lol
reply by Carlos' girl on 10-Jun-2021
    Sometimes fanstory is a good place to vent lol ever so slightly
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
    I fear sometimes I'm not so slightly
reply by Carlos' girl on 10-Jun-2021
    Agreed. I have had to edit my mouth here more than once lol. Dont worry. Be happy.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
    thanks! I think you can also tell I'm not too worried - at least about my blathering.
reply by Carlos' girl on 10-Jun-2021
    Lol. Have a good day
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
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Hello Mystery Writer.

This is a good one. You found a way to describe the chortling, giggling, and sneering VP. This is the worst VP in history. I'm not sure whether to thank Obama or Obiden for this. Obama is now proclaiming Obiden is carrying on his philosophy.

I know that when someone becomes financially bankrupt they can file Chapter 11 for protection. What do you file when you become intellectually bankrupt?

Robert



 Comment Written 09-Jun-2021

reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
    divorce - from public office!
Comment from Susan Newell
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I'm trying very hard to find humor in this very apt poem about a cackling, incompetent witch. So, what is the name of Joe Biden's life insurance carrier? Kamala Harris.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2021

reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
    yeah. the judges may not find any, either.
    Thought maybe Kamala's humor might count. She has enough for everybody. Her latest made me so angry, I had to write this.
Comment from Eternal Muse
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It's a fun poem about Kamala and her rise in the world. I liked the light humor, the picture, the rhyming and presentation.

I liked your humorous reference to Joe Biden making Kamala take care of the borders and immigration:

I mean, the border mess can wait
THIS is my predestined fate
Well, after all, I didn't ask
For the messy border task

This should do extremely well in the contest, good luck with it.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2021

reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
    thank you for your kind review.
    I am surprised that is shows humor on my part. I was hoping the judges would think Kamala's was enough.
    Just occurred to me, that you were being facetious. ha! good one.
reply by Eternal Muse on 09-Jun-2021
    What is facetious? (lol)
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
    smiling (phew! you were.)
reply by Eternal Muse on 09-Jun-2021
    This poem is good stuff, you the the right edge, should do well in the contest. You got my vote.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
    thank you!!!!!
Comment from Lana Marie
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Ha ha! Good job on this writing contest!
"This is serious " Nice rhyming throughout.
good luck to you on this one. I wonder how many will "get it"

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2021

reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
    good question.
    Am hoping judges will think Kamala's humor will suffice to make this a humorous piece.