Running Blind
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Running Blind ~ Chapter Five "The Blind Girl's toughest cold case.
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Comment from Begin Again
It looked like Sally was moving the case forward, and things were going smoothly... And then here comes trouble using a stolen vehicle and a false name... nothing like leading them astray. But, of course, he's not going to let anything stop him or get between him and the painting... Regardless of who he hurts...But Blind Girl has a whole police force and her darling husband to protect her. Very well written, Sally, and definitely a joy to read. Keep us on our toes, Sally!! Smiles and hugs, Carol
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
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It looked like Sally was moving the case forward, and things were going smoothly... And then here comes trouble using a stolen vehicle and a false name... nothing like leading them astray. But, of course, he's not going to let anything stop him or get between him and the painting... Regardless of who he hurts...But Blind Girl has a whole police force and her darling husband to protect her. Very well written, Sally, and definitely a joy to read. Keep us on our toes, Sally!! Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment Written 13-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
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Wow, thanks so much for the lovely review and kind compliments, dear Carol. It is greatly appreciated. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs...
Comment from Sankey
This was a great read once again. You are first cab off the rank today. Some suggestions for you if not spags. I wondered if "forecast" was better than forcasted?
I, of course, [received](accepted??) his kindness.
I purposefully rode [with} (in) Dr. Marie MacLavish's truck OR
I purposefully rode with Dr. Marie MacLavish['s](in her) truck
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2021
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This was a great read once again. You are first cab off the rank today. Some suggestions for you if not spags. I wondered if "forecast" was better than forcasted?
I, of course, [received](accepted??) his kindness.
I purposefully rode [with} (in) Dr. Marie MacLavish's truck OR
I purposefully rode with Dr. Marie MacLavish['s](in her) truck
Comment Written 13-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2021
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Dear Geoff, thanks so much for the stellar review and shiny stars. It is so appreciated. You make my writing day shine. Sending you my best with blessings abundant,
Sal XOs...
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Already...the humor, a bit gallows: "rousing our state bird: the mosquito." You have such fun imagery: "Unearthing myself from the covers," You're leaving us there? We'll definitely be back: "Now for the good part," she said." Another carrot to get us back here: "I'll get you too, Blind Girl, and the paintings...." Well orchestrated.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
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Already...the humor, a bit gallows: "rousing our state bird: the mosquito." You have such fun imagery: "Unearthing myself from the covers," You're leaving us there? We'll definitely be back: "Now for the good part," she said." Another carrot to get us back here: "I'll get you too, Blind Girl, and the paintings...." Well orchestrated.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review of my book chapter, dear Liz. Blessings always, Sal XOs...
Comment from Judy Lawless
This is another well-written chapter, Sally. I can feel that humid heat in New Orleans, and feel the bite of those mosquitos. We have an abundance of them in Ontario, Canada too.
One little spag: There was a(n) auction going (on) ...
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
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This is another well-written chapter, Sally. I can feel that humid heat in New Orleans, and feel the bite of those mosquitos. We have an abundance of them in Ontario, Canada too.
One little spag: There was a(n) auction going (on) ...
Comment Written 13-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and typo catches. It is always so appreciated, dear Judy. Blessings always, Sal XOs...
Comment from damommy
This Lonnie Hastings sounds like an evil person for sure. He's out to get Sally, but for what reason? Because she's investing the case? Now we have to worry about that. Great chapter.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
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This Lonnie Hastings sounds like an evil person for sure. He's out to get Sally, but for what reason? Because she's investing the case? Now we have to worry about that. Great chapter.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review of my book chapter, dear Yvonne. It is greatly appreciated. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs...
Comment from BethShelby
This is another interesting chapter. I lived in New Orleans for seventeen years so anything that is set in that city is of interest to me. I can identify with the stifling heat you mention. It seem Sally always has someone who wants her dead. She is very clever and always solves her cold cases so I anxious to see how this one will go down.
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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
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This is another interesting chapter. I lived in New Orleans for seventeen years so anything that is set in that city is of interest to me. I can identify with the stifling heat you mention. It seem Sally always has someone who wants her dead. She is very clever and always solves her cold cases so I anxious to see how this one will go down.
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Comment Written 13-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
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Thank you, dear Beth. I'm so glad you're enjoying this book. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs...
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Well, everything was going just fine, they had aquired a lot of DNA, and everyone was happy. Then that creep turned up. But they'll be none the wiser about who he is when they check out the home address. The Blind girl had better be careful, he's determined to get her and the painting. He has no idea what he's up against though. Anyone touch Sal, and they'll have the whole policeforce coming down on them, let alone King!! Another, excellent chapter, my friend. :)) Sandra. xx
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2021
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Well, everything was going just fine, they had aquired a lot of DNA, and everyone was happy. Then that creep turned up. But they'll be none the wiser about who he is when they check out the home address. The Blind girl had better be careful, he's determined to get her and the painting. He has no idea what he's up against though. Anyone touch Sal, and they'll have the whole policeforce coming down on them, let alone King!! Another, excellent chapter, my friend. :)) Sandra. xx
Comment Written 13-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review and generous six stars, dear Sandra. It is greatly appreciated. I've lost a few of my stalwart reviews lately and it is crushing! Please don't leave me. I saw your review and shouted with joy. Thanks again. It means so much. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs....
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Of course I won't leave you, Sal, not while I don't know whether he's going to get your paintings! You have to stop him. Sometimes people stop reviewing for various reasons. Problems at home, sickness, this virus has depressed many people, and of course just because they've gone away for a holiday. Don't worry, they'll be back. You're a very talented writer, and I admire you greatly. Sending you a ginormous hug! xxxx
Comment from barbara.wilkey
And the plot thickens, of course it does, LOL. I really am enjoying this mystery. I can't wait to link the pieces together.
Jean-Baptiste sat next to Jackson and me and started to weep. (sat beside Jackson)
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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2021
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And the plot thickens, of course it does, LOL. I really am enjoying this mystery. I can't wait to link the pieces together.
Jean-Baptiste sat next to Jackson and me and started to weep. (sat beside Jackson)
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Comment Written 13-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and comments, dear Barbara. Both are so appreciated. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs....
