Keep Believing
a contest entry30 total reviews
Comment from Janet Foor
Excellent ABC poem with a powerful message. Each line gives profound insight into His kingdom.
Very nicely done and good luck.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2021
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Excellent ABC poem with a powerful message. Each line gives profound insight into His kingdom.
Very nicely done and good luck.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 08-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your review and very kind comments.
Comment from joycetreasures
Hello,
I like this poem about God's love for all of us. Your imagery is a fitting photo for your poem. I really like this message. Yes, we should all keep believing in God Love and His Word. God said, His word will not come back void. I pray that hatred will eventually go away for good in our world. I love the author notes and powerful scriptures. I love your last line in this poem, " We're all the same." Nicely written &well done. Nice structure and rhythm. Thank you.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2021
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Hello,
I like this poem about God's love for all of us. Your imagery is a fitting photo for your poem. I really like this message. Yes, we should all keep believing in God Love and His Word. God said, His word will not come back void. I pray that hatred will eventually go away for good in our world. I love the author notes and powerful scriptures. I love your last line in this poem, " We're all the same." Nicely written &well done. Nice structure and rhythm. Thank you.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your review, very kind comments, and six-star rating.
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You are welcome. Yes, keep believing!!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Keep Believing
Nice entry for the ABC writing prompt contest. It's a beautiful notion. I like to believe we can all live in harmony. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2021
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Keep Believing
Nice entry for the ABC writing prompt contest. It's a beautiful notion. I like to believe we can all live in harmony. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your review and best wishes.
Comment from Raul1
You have written a very good poem. It's beautifully written. I like how you structured this poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2021
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You have written a very good poem. It's beautifully written. I like how you structured this poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 08-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your review and best wishes.
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You're welcome
Comment from Wendy G
A fine poem of hope and encouragement as well as faith, coupled with a desire and prayer for peace on earth. May it be so and soon. Best wishes for your entry.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2021
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A fine poem of hope and encouragement as well as faith, coupled with a desire and prayer for peace on earth. May it be so and soon. Best wishes for your entry.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your review and best wishes.
Comment from lancellot
Very good, even if this was a spiritual piece, I think the form and way you wrote it would convey any other message you chose in the same way. Great presentation too.
I think this will do very well in the contest and will be in the winner's circle.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2021
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Very good, even if this was a spiritual piece, I think the form and way you wrote it would convey any other message you chose in the same way. Great presentation too.
I think this will do very well in the contest and will be in the winner's circle.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your review and very kind comments.
Comment from royowen
Jesus was the ultimate socialist. The only one capable of being sole ruler and not be be maimed by the baser nature of man, unlike the rest of us, only He has achieved this, that's why He was the only one who could be the sacrifice for all, bless His name. Well done, good luck, great post, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2021
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Jesus was the ultimate socialist. The only one capable of being sole ruler and not be be maimed by the baser nature of man, unlike the rest of us, only He has achieved this, that's why He was the only one who could be the sacrifice for all, bless His name. Well done, good luck, great post, blessings Roy
Comment Written 08-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your review and best wishes...
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Well done
Comment from lyenochka
Great job with your rhyming ABC poem! And yes, may Hope in Jesus "end all bias and its domain." And may Christians remember that we are all equally precious to the Lord. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2021
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Great job with your rhyming ABC poem! And yes, may Hope in Jesus "end all bias and its domain." And may Christians remember that we are all equally precious to the Lord. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 08-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your review and best wishes...
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine sentiment and we are all equal under God if only all humans were believers and lived in peace with each other and embrace our differences, much enjoyed, great rhymes, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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A fine sentiment and we are all equal under God if only all humans were believers and lived in peace with each other and embrace our differences, much enjoyed, great rhymes, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 07-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Anne Johnston
Very well done on this ABC poem. good rhyming, and creates a feeling of love and peace. Thank you for sharing all those scriptures to back up your poem. I like your last thought that Jesus views us all the same.
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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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Very well done on this ABC poem. good rhyming, and creates a feeling of love and peace. Thank you for sharing all those scriptures to back up your poem. I like your last thought that Jesus views us all the same.
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Comment Written 07-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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Thanks so much for your review and comments...
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You are welcome
