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Keep Believing

a contest entry

30 total reviews 
Comment from Aussie
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Good choice of background colors. Not so sure when the hatred will cease. The red necks are honing their tools. Still, in the Book of Revelation, it does say "and the blacks shall rise up." Well said, well written and congrats on your contest win. K XX

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2021

reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
    Aussie,

    Thanks so much for the congrats, your review, and your comments; they are greatly appreciated.

    Have a wonderful and blessed weekend.

    Blessings...Portia
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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Good work in the acrostic form--I see you chose to do a bonus 5th line--this is a powerful piece with a heartfelt plea--we can only hope--things sure don't look good. Thanks for notes!

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2021

reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
    Elizabeth,

    Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.

    Have a wonderful and blessed weekend.

    Blessings...Portia
Comment from estory
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Keep the faith, my friend, Jesus is the answer to our sad world of today. But it takes a stout heart and deep grounded faith to stand what we are going through. Sometimes I think I am in ancient Rome or Sodom and Gomorah. estory

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2021

reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
    estory,

    Thanks so much for your review and wise comments. I totally agree; Jesus is the only answer to our sad world of today.
    For all that is going on, it appears that we are living like it was in the days of Noah.

    Have a wonderful and blessed weekend.

    Blessings...Portia
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Nice artwork and
presentation.
-You wrote a good
poem with effective
imagery and rhyme.
-A good message about
the desire to live in peace
and have hope.
-A good concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2021

reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
    Thank you
reply by Pam (respa) on 09-Jun-2021
    You are welcome.
Comment from Senyai
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Hi,

An uplifting poem wishing for peace, love and harmony in the torn and desperate world. A great ABC entry for the writing prompt with beautiful presentation and photo to accompany.

Heartfelt words in this polished poem.
Nice work!

All the best,
Senyai


 Comment Written 09-Jun-2021

reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
    Thank you
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
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'Keep Believing', is an extremely well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. It was a pleasure to read and review anything of this calibre. I look forward to seeing your next post.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2021

reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
    Thank you
reply by duchessofdrumborg on 09-Jun-2021
    You're welcome.
Comment from Eternal Muse
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A very nice and soothing spiritual poem, and thank you for the scriptural references. You bring out well that it is important to live in peace, with no hatred and only love.

Great presentation and imagery. Thank you your detailed author notes too.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2021

reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
    Thank you
Comment from Patty Palmer
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This is a great poem. Everyone wants to live in peace. When the planets align and the earth ceases to exist as we know it. I doubt hatred will ever cease. How can it when our world is in such deep dodo thanks to Biden and his friends.
Good job!

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2021

reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
    Thank you
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
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This is a nicely written abc spiritual poem. It has a nice flow and rhyme. Beautiful overall background colour and font. Well done. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2021

reply by the author on 08-Jun-2021
    Thanks so much for your review and best wishes...
Comment from AnnaLinda
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This is such a beautiful poem and message, Poet.
Very nice end rhymes, presentation and overall positivity.
I also appreciate your multiple scripture references.

Let Peace reign in this earthly domain.

Best wishes in the contest,

Anna

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2021

reply by the author on 08-Jun-2021
    Anna,

    Thanks so much for your review and best wishes.