Reviews from

Keep Believing

a contest entry

30 total reviews 
Comment from Begin Again
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You had me from the title... I honestly have faith in our Lord and believe that he will show us the way to find, peace, love, and happiness instead of the hatred, fighting, and sadness we seem to reap now. It will take us all to find our way...just open up our hearts and minds. Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 11-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
    Carol,
    Thanks so much for your review and very uplifting comments.

    Have a wonderful and blessed weekend.

    Hugs...Portia
reply by Begin Again on 11-Jun-2021
    the same to you, Portia! God bless!
Comment from harmony13
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This poem states a statement well needed. I found these words having
a message to all. The last line says it all. The poem is clear, strong
and creative. The artwork is perfect. Thank you for the author's notes -
the bible quotes speak volumes! Have a great weekend!...Maria

 Comment Written 11-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
    Maria,

    Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.

    Have a wonderful and blessed weekend.

    Hugs...Portia
Comment from Bill Schott
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This ABC poem, Keep Believing, uses a EFGHI acrostic formatting and points the readers to biblical references when dealing with living with each other and growing in faith.

 Comment Written 11-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
    Bill,

    Thanks so much for your review and comments.

    Have a wonderful and blessed weekend.


    Portia
Comment from Urial
Exceptional
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Dear Pharp,

Thank you for the positive poem. I am stunned the words in this work, such as ' proclamation' which is as Jesus's proclamation of God's Kingdom. You have explained that hatred will cease and be replaced by Hope. You cry out in the times of revelation! Excellent!

peace be with you,

Urial

 Comment Written 11-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
    Urial,

    Thanks so much for such an outstanding review, six-star rating, and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.

    Have a wonderful and blessed weekend.

    Portia


reply by Urial on 12-Jun-2021
    You earned it Portia!
Comment from Boogienights
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Congratulations on your win, you certainly deserved it. I love everything about your poem and the emotions it stirred in me. A wonderful sentiment expressed here, thanks for sharing. :)

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021

    Thanks so much for the congrats, your review, and your very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.

    Have a wonderful and blessed weekend.

    Hugs...Portia
Comment from June Sargent
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If we would only look at one another the way God does, there would not be hatred or bias. He sees what is beneath our skin - our hearts. We are all part of His family - born in sin, but redeemed by His Son. Therefore, we are all His children - brothers and sisters who should be living in peace.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
    June,

    Thanks so much for your review and uplifting comments; they are greatly appreciated.

    Have a wonderful and blessed weekend.

    Blessings...POrtia
Comment from Sally Law
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So good to see you, dear Portia! You've been on my mind and heart. A wonderful word and greatly needed for today. Thank you! Sending you my best today as always and blessings abundant,
Sal XOs...

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
    Sally,

    It is great to see you, my friend. I pray all is well with you and your family.

    It is great to be back; I had to take time off from Fanstory to take care of my husband. My youngest son is now helping me with his care.

    Thanks so much for your review and your warm and kind thoughts.

    Have a wonderful and blessed weekend.

    Love and lots and a Big Hug...Portia
Comment from Nathan J Hope
Exceptional
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The peace of God,which surpasses all understanding will guard your hearts and your minds in Jesus Christ.

Thank you for sharing ,it gives me hope .

This poem deserves 6 stars .
God bless

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
    Nathan,

    Thanks so much for such an outstanding review, six-star rating, and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.

    Have a wonderful and blessed weekend.

    Blessings...Portia
Comment from Saria/Shreyamsi
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I must thankyou for sharing! It restored a sense of hope in me. I really hope that your writings become reality one day. This poem really created a mood and a feeling of trust in the universe!

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
    Saria,

    Thanks so much for your review and very kind and uplifting comments. We must continue to trust and believe.

    Have a wonderful and blessed weekend.

    Blessings...Portia
reply by Saria/Shreyamsi on 12-Jun-2021
    Welcome :)
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
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We are all His creation and it is our bounded duty in His eyes to love humanity and live in peace and harmony. So let's believe in ourselves and work towards this s goal however hard it is. I liked your short and meaningful poem. Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
    Seshadri,

    Thank you so much for your review and very kind and uplifting comments; they are greatly appreciated.

    Have a wonderful and blessed weekend.

    Blessings...Portia