Truck's Life
A Truck Tragedy5 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fun post with good rhymes and a slightly uneven meter, but I enjoyed the story here and hope you have a chance to win the contest, much fun, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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A fun post with good rhymes and a slightly uneven meter, but I enjoyed the story here and hope you have a chance to win the contest, much fun, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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Thanks for your review. I made a few changes, now a 5-6-8 meter.
Comment from Janet Foor
Great picture of an old pick-up-truck. I'm sure it can tell a great many stories from when it was brand new.
Good rhyme and fun to read.
Blessings
Janet
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Great picture of an old pick-up-truck. I'm sure it can tell a great many stories from when it was brand new.
Good rhyme and fun to read.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 07-Jun-2021
Comment from Anne Johnston
"Rusted and crusted
Decrepit and busted
I sit on the side of the road"
What a great description of the old truck. Great rhyming and easy to read.
This is a message for us as well - know when to retire and not end up worn out and useless.
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"Rusted and crusted
Decrepit and busted
I sit on the side of the road"
What a great description of the old truck. Great rhyming and easy to read.
This is a message for us as well - know when to retire and not end up worn out and useless.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2021
Comment from equestrik
This is well written and creative with a really well chosen picture to accompany your writing. It is overall an excellent pesentation for the 'My Truck' wriing prompt.
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This is well written and creative with a really well chosen picture to accompany your writing. It is overall an excellent pesentation for the 'My Truck' wriing prompt.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2021
Comment from royowen
These old hulks car restores are looking for them all over the place, they are quite often found on old farms, where the people searching for these wonderful old relics are restored to pristine condition, beautifully written my friend in roughly 5/6/8 (give or take) with aab rhyming, very clever, well don, good luck, blessings Roy
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These old hulks car restores are looking for them all over the place, they are quite often found on old farms, where the people searching for these wonderful old relics are restored to pristine condition, beautifully written my friend in roughly 5/6/8 (give or take) with aab rhyming, very clever, well don, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 07-Jun-2021
