Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

This is a beautiful haiku, non-traditional but still a haiku, nonetheless. A stunning work. Sending you my best today as always, and my best for the upcoming contest,

Sal XOs

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2021

Sally,

Thanks so much for an outstanding review, very kind comments, and best wishes.

Have a great day.

Blessings...

Comment from Lana Marie

Excellent

First of all, that's a very nice presentation. I like the color scheme. your words describe perfectly the scenery and the feel in the photograph. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2021

Lana,

Thank you for your review, comments, and best wishes.

Comment from Tarekwrites

Good

I like it! It definitely Evokes some feelings that come with sunrise without actually talking about them which is great. At first I didn't get the last line but on second read understood it better and added a new layer

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2021

Thanks so much for your review and comments.

Comment from SHABAMO

Good

Hi friend,

I really liked the poem, but I do not think this met the haiku criteria. I read it as 3, 6, and 5 syllables rather than 5, 7 5.

- Shabamo

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2021

Shabamo,

Thanks for your review and comments. A strict syllable count is not required for this writing prompt, as indicated below.


Writing Prompt
For this contest, you are challenged to write a Haiku poem. Haiku is a form of poetry that only uses three lines. A popular format is to have the first line contains five (5) syllables, the second line have seven (7) syllables, and the third line contains five (5) syllables, but a strict syllable count is not required.

Blessings...