feed the Fire
If you don't, it will die.17 total reviews
Comment from Eternal Muse
A very good rendition of the contest. Presentation deserved an Oscar! (smile).
Excellent creative imagery and visuals.
Good luck in the contest - this should do very well.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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A very good rendition of the contest. Presentation deserved an Oscar! (smile).
Excellent creative imagery and visuals.
Good luck in the contest - this should do very well.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your supportive review and comments. So far, it's doing OK in the voting. Not great, but I'm happy. I appreciate your stopping by to read my poem.
Comment from equestrik
This is a sad commentary on the way a person's light can be extinguished. I is a sad reality and you have written it so well. Bes to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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This is a sad commentary on the way a person's light can be extinguished. I is a sad reality and you have written it so well. Bes to you in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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Thank you very much for your encouraging, kind comments and review. I appreciate it a lot. Hugs.
Comment from Karen Estep
I really enjoyed this piece! The graphic you chose certainly fits the bill, and the truth of your writing hits home. So much of the joy in life is snuffed out these days. Sad but true. Good luck in the contest@
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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I really enjoyed this piece! The graphic you chose certainly fits the bill, and the truth of your writing hits home. So much of the joy in life is snuffed out these days. Sad but true. Good luck in the contest@
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your supportive and encouraging review. It is appreciated.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'feed the Fire', is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill this talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. Good luck with the contest. My fingers are crossed for you.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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'feed the Fire', is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill this talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. Good luck with the contest. My fingers are crossed for you.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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Thank you! That was so nice of you to say. I appreciate your encouraging comments and review.
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Dear Anon, you're very welcome.
God bless you, take care and stay safe!
the Duchess
Comment from Wendy G
I like the triple Joseph's Star because it seems you have traced the journey of a woman's lifetime from infancy through maturity and into old age and death - although it could be simply the death of one's potential through lack of nurture, lack of support. Whichever, it is thought-provoking, and well written. Good wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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I like the triple Joseph's Star because it seems you have traced the journey of a woman's lifetime from infancy through maturity and into old age and death - although it could be simply the death of one's potential through lack of nurture, lack of support. Whichever, it is thought-provoking, and well written. Good wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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thank you! I appreciate that you stopped by to read and review my poem. Hugs.
Comment from Patty Palmer
Your poem tells the life of fire from spark to the end when it is extinguished. I thought that was pretty neat to go from one part of the fire to the next. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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Your poem tells the life of fire from spark to the end when it is extinguished. I thought that was pretty neat to go from one part of the fire to the next. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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Thank you, Patty, for your supportive and encouraging words. Your comments and review our humbly appreciated. Hugs.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Sobering cautionary tale brilliantly rendered in this stunning form. Kudos for omitting punctuation and thus letting your well-chosen words pack their punch. Stunning imagery.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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Sobering cautionary tale brilliantly rendered in this stunning form. Kudos for omitting punctuation and thus letting your well-chosen words pack their punch. Stunning imagery.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much. Your words have given me and encouragement and have made me feel and sense of accomplishment. :-) Thank you so much for your review! Hugs.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
If you don't, it will die.
feed the Fire
Nice entry for the Joseph's Star writing prompt contest. I like the form....it looks cool. Good flow throughout the poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2021
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If you don't, it will die.
feed the Fire
Nice entry for the Joseph's Star writing prompt contest. I like the form....it looks cool. Good flow throughout the poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2021
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Thank you. I was having some trouble with the flow, actually. I am pleased that you think it worked out. I appreciate your comments, and your review. Hugs.
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Thank you. I was having some trouble with the flow, actually. I am pleased that you think it worked out. I appreciate your comments, and your review. Hugs.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your excellent poem vividly describes the birth, rise, and fall of that
"fire"--that special light--that gives life much of its meaning. The expression "use it or lose it"--though not very poetic, comes to mind.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2021
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Your excellent poem vividly describes the birth, rise, and fall of that
"fire"--that special light--that gives life much of its meaning. The expression "use it or lose it"--though not very poetic, comes to mind.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your kind comments and review. They are appreciated.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
How short life is and our flame soon dies and what we leave behind is a dying ember of what once was a fiery flame, a trio of poignant stars here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2021
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How short life is and our flame soon dies and what we leave behind is a dying ember of what once was a fiery flame, a trio of poignant stars here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your thoughtful comments and review. They are appreciated.
