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A rhyme gone baaad
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Comment from
kiwisteveh
Ah it's easy to mock the old nursery rhymes isn't it and this one is a special target. I remember this version...
Mary had a little lamb,
Her father shot it dead.
Now Mary takes her lamb to school
Between two lumps of bread.
Well done for formatting it into the nonet and for the fun approach.
Steve
Comment Written 06-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2021
Hi Steve,
Thanks for stopping by
Your version is cuter.
I?d change )lumps( to )crusts(. Cheers
- Lobber
Comment from
blondie560
Oh my this is a real twist on Mary Had A Little Lamb! It's like the lamb fell from Grace and is now the black sheep of the family! Only this black sheep is now dinner! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 06-Jun-2021
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