The Walkers
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Getting to know one another."The Final Gabriel Hope Journey
14 total reviews
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Boys ready to save souls on daily business and still have some fun doing it:) Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the next chapter.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2021
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Boys ready to save souls on daily business and still have some fun doing it:) Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the next chapter.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2021
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Hi, Iza. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Alaskastory
"Getting to know one another." appears to be the beginning of an adventurous story. There are so many aspects mentioned, and imaginary details that how it will progress is a mystery in many ways. Well done.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2021
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"Getting to know one another." appears to be the beginning of an adventurous story. There are so many aspects mentioned, and imaginary details that how it will progress is a mystery in many ways. Well done.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2021
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Hello, my friend. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I shall have to go and read the other parts, Mike, this is such a good book. What I like is, it's so believable. Parallel worlds might not be fiction, we don't know anything that is outside our realm of understanding. I' really enjoyed this part, my friend, Well done. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2021
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I shall have to go and read the other parts, Mike, this is such a good book. What I like is, it's so believable. Parallel worlds might not be fiction, we don't know anything that is outside our realm of understanding. I' really enjoyed this part, my friend, Well done. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 03-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2021
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Hi, Sandra. This book is starting to get noticed. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, this crew are smart, talented, and big. But it looks like they will need every tool and edge they can muster up to fight the coming battles ahead. I'm glad I caught this story early, so that I can go back and catch up, and maybe be able to keep up. Thanks for sharing. Wish I had a six.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2021
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Well, this crew are smart, talented, and big. But it looks like they will need every tool and edge they can muster up to fight the coming battles ahead. I'm glad I caught this story early, so that I can go back and catch up, and maybe be able to keep up. Thanks for sharing. Wish I had a six.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2021
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I hope I can do justice with the visual descriptions of the next world. Recently, I found, visual artist, Zastoskiy Victor who has a great eye for desolate landscapes. Thanks again!
Have a great day, and God bless,
mike
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
PAPASSMIKE:
I just stumbled upon your book and I like what I have read here. I am going to have to become one of your fans so I can keep up with it. I always like stories about groups doing the Lord's work. Thanks for sharing.
Rdfrdmom2
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2021
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PAPASSMIKE:
I just stumbled upon your book and I like what I have read here. I am going to have to become one of your fans so I can keep up with it. I always like stories about groups doing the Lord's work. Thanks for sharing.
Rdfrdmom2
Comment Written 02-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2021
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Hello, my friend. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from nancy_e_davis
This is going to be some fight. I will be watching for it Mike. You have gathered a formable group here and they will be a powerful army with our Heavenly Father on our side.
Well done. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2021
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This is going to be some fight. I will be watching for it Mike. You have gathered a formable group here and they will be a powerful army with our Heavenly Father on our side.
Well done. Nancy:)
Comment Written 02-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2021
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Hi, Nancy. We start the journey in the next one. I hope to start on it tomorrow. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from ShirleyT1
You've created some unique characters for your story. I enjoyed reading about their developing relationship, all individuals but with some common traits and goals. This is a very interesting concept and I look forward to reading additional chapters.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2021
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You've created some unique characters for your story. I enjoyed reading about their developing relationship, all individuals but with some common traits and goals. This is a very interesting concept and I look forward to reading additional chapters.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2021
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Hi, Shirley. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
This is a fascinating story, Papa Mike. How much of it is based on actual theology/true Christian doctrine, and how much of it is fantasy? Since I've been through the Bible a few times, it seems that a large part is your own creativity, which is fine... I know that human trafficking is a huge problem these days, but breeding demons is an unimaginable evil that should be avoided at all costs. I know the Bible recorded some mating between mortals and immortals in ancient times, but hopefully this remains a thing of the past.
Errors and suggestions:
"Yes, The Arch Angel and General of the Lord's armies."
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"Yes, The Archangel and General of the Lord's armies." [I could be wrong, but I do think "Archangel" is one word]
"To destroy a slave market where young girls sold to evil men for breeding a new race of powerful, monstrous demons.
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"To destroy a slave market where young girls are sold to evil men for breeding a new race of powerful, monstrous demons.
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These are some very large people, but also very physically fit. Something tells me that they will need to be!
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2021
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This is a fascinating story, Papa Mike. How much of it is based on actual theology/true Christian doctrine, and how much of it is fantasy? Since I've been through the Bible a few times, it seems that a large part is your own creativity, which is fine... I know that human trafficking is a huge problem these days, but breeding demons is an unimaginable evil that should be avoided at all costs. I know the Bible recorded some mating between mortals and immortals in ancient times, but hopefully this remains a thing of the past.
Errors and suggestions:
"Yes, The Arch Angel and General of the Lord's armies."
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"Yes, The Archangel and General of the Lord's armies." [I could be wrong, but I do think "Archangel" is one word]
"To destroy a slave market where young girls sold to evil men for breeding a new race of powerful, monstrous demons.
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"To destroy a slave market where young girls are sold to evil men for breeding a new race of powerful, monstrous demons.
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These are some very large people, but also very physically fit. Something tells me that they will need to be!
Comment Written 02-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2021
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Hi, Mary Kay. Thank you for your kind words and help with this chapter!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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You're very welcome, Papa Mike. I'm happy to help. Thank you very much, and God bless you too, my friend.
- Mary Kay
Comment from estory
What I really liked about this chapter was the down home moments, the moments when they talk about enjoying a good meal after a hard days work. That kind of stood out in contrast to the spiritual underpinnings of the story, and this more fantastic, surreal part at the end when you describe hell and heaven and the demons that populate it. Nice natural, realistic dialogue with elements of personality and character coming through it. estory
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2021
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What I really liked about this chapter was the down home moments, the moments when they talk about enjoying a good meal after a hard days work. That kind of stood out in contrast to the spiritual underpinnings of the story, and this more fantastic, surreal part at the end when you describe hell and heaven and the demons that populate it. Nice natural, realistic dialogue with elements of personality and character coming through it. estory
Comment Written 01-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2021
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Hello, my friend. I hope I can do justice to the world I want to describe in the next chapter. It will key to the book. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from royowen
I guess the best thing about anyone is not the size of the body that counts, but the size of one's faith, we only have to look at the relative size of Goliath to David. Beautifully written My friend Mike, good job, blessings Roy
Typo : Both of them stop(ped) at the entrance. 2: Pete (Micheal) Michael?
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2021
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I guess the best thing about anyone is not the size of the body that counts, but the size of one's faith, we only have to look at the relative size of Goliath to David. Beautifully written My friend Mike, good job, blessings Roy
Typo : Both of them stop(ped) at the entrance. 2: Pete (Micheal) Michael?
Comment Written 01-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2021
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The visuals in the next chapter are going to be key to the book. Thank you for your kind words and help with this chapter!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Well done
