The Mysterious AP
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Comment from CrystieCookie999
This has a definite voice, with a faulty prescription turning out to be more than it seems. Sometimes it sounded like a New Joisey accent, and sometimes it was just plain malaprops all over the place. It keeps the spirit of the topic. I thought it was consistent in tone from beginning to end. Every paragraph contained a misspelling or mis-pronunciation. Nice entry.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2021
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This has a definite voice, with a faulty prescription turning out to be more than it seems. Sometimes it sounded like a New Joisey accent, and sometimes it was just plain malaprops all over the place. It keeps the spirit of the topic. I thought it was consistent in tone from beginning to end. Every paragraph contained a misspelling or mis-pronunciation. Nice entry.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much for the 6 and for your comments. Had to laugh at the New Jersey reference as I am a Southerner.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A clever well thought out story and I loved the inventive language which gave this write some authenticity and humour, I was entertained here and I enjoyed the ride, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2021
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A clever well thought out story and I loved the inventive language which gave this write some authenticity and humour, I was entertained here and I enjoyed the ride, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2021
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thanks, Dolly. my aim, to entertain. :) Puns seemed to hide from me, however.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Ha, ha, ha this was such a funny read almost like the speech of tipsy person: "Seems t'ween the doc and the farmasis, they caught up with the fake PA - (what does that mean, anyway?) - and the lawng the shawert of this tail is that the PA turned out to be my ex ma-in-law in disgize. Can you b'lieve the?" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2021
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Ha, ha, ha this was such a funny read almost like the speech of tipsy person: "Seems t'ween the doc and the farmasis, they caught up with the fake PA - (what does that mean, anyway?) - and the lawng the shawert of this tail is that the PA turned out to be my ex ma-in-law in disgize. Can you b'lieve the?" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2021
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thanks. you have a unique way of meeting the word count. I must give that a try.
Glad you liked my effort. ( wasn't tipsy - promise)
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Hilarious! A tour de force of malaprops! I did something similar once--much longer and rife with illogic and nonsense besides--and half the readers took it at face value. I can't wait until this contest is over so that I can see the reviews this gets. I think you have a winner here. Please message me if it doesn't win (I won't know who the author is).
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2021
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Hilarious! A tour de force of malaprops! I did something similar once--much longer and rife with illogic and nonsense besides--and half the readers took it at face value. I can't wait until this contest is over so that I can see the reviews this gets. I think you have a winner here. Please message me if it doesn't win (I won't know who the author is).
Comment Written 03-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2021
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Thanks, Liz. One gal said I sounded tipsy. nope, just silly.
I doubt seriously I'll win, but appreciate your opinion!!!!
If I win, you'll know who I am.:)
