Teddy
It happens far to often2 total reviews
Comment from lancellot
Okay, well, I guess it sucks to be Teddy. That quick, short and intense, and I'm sure you planned for it to be just that way. Job well done. One of the hallmarks of good flash fiction is getting an emotional reaction and being unexpected.
Good work on doing both.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2021
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Okay, well, I guess it sucks to be Teddy. That quick, short and intense, and I'm sure you planned for it to be just that way. Job well done. One of the hallmarks of good flash fiction is getting an emotional reaction and being unexpected.
Good work on doing both.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your wonderful review.
Comment from mermaids
The reader feels for Teddy as he witnesses his mother's death at the hands of his father. Your words are true to life and bring forth the sense of tragedy. Excellent fifty word story.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2021
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The reader feels for Teddy as he witnesses his mother's death at the hands of his father. Your words are true to life and bring forth the sense of tragedy. Excellent fifty word story.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2021
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Thank you.
