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End or Beginning for America

As a person thinks and speaks, so it will be!

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Comment from pome lover
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and we will certainly perish if the incapable and intentionally misleading duo should win. The media is mainly responsible for programming the populace, their never-ending lies about the opposition -- they are not news people. They are propagandists.
If given an honest chance, I believe the quiet conservatives who have done their research, will come through. I just hope those who dislike Trump because of his personality, will remember all the good things he did for them!
I look at the growing number of Harris/Walz signs in my neighborhood and would love to ask them what do they like about them?
One sign says "educators for Harris". If that isn't mind boggling, I don't know what is.
Katharine

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
    Thank you Katharine for the time you took to read my poem. A special thanks for the comment as well. I enjoy your poems and messages behind them. One thing for sure we are not in Kansas anymore lol.
reply by pome lover on 20-Oct-2024
    you are most welcome. And thank you, for reading mine!
    I don't even feel like we're in America.
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
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Very well written poetry, excellent Biblical perspective, which I agree with completely. God's people need to wake up, and bring as many others into the fold as possible, through God's grace and the Presence of the Holy Spirit in the world.

One suggestion:

Praying for Godly discernment is what it will take
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Praying for godly discernment is what it will take [I think it's with a small "g" even in the Bible]

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No matter what's going on around us, we have to keep our eyes on Jesus!

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
    Thanks Mary Kay for your time once again. It is appreciated a lot. I recall him saying to wake up sleepers. I pray that those asleep will awaken as those that are awake lift Him up in order they be drawn in. If you ask me, our instructions are pretty plain. Thanks Again and have a great and positive weekend and upcoming week.
reply by Mary Kay Bonfante on 11-Jun-2021
    You're very welcome, Jennifer, and thank you, also. Yes, God has left us clear instructions. May we all be obedient to our loving Master and Friend! Blessings, Mary Kay
Comment from Anne Johnston
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Great rhyming and a good description of what our world is like today.
I agree with your verse: "Praying for Godly discernment is what it will take
In order to see light from the dark and differentiate". God is in control and we know that the future is in His hands.

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
    Thank you for your time once again. I do appreciate it so much. Some petitions, request and a move come only through fasting (deny self) and prayer (believing)! Have a great week and thanks again!
reply by Anne Johnston on 11-Jun-2021
    You are welcome
Comment from equestrik
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I think the picture along with your writing and the quote give food for thought-good points well made and yes, people perish for lack of knowledge and vision.

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
    Thank you for your time reviewing words from the heart me inspired by Him. I don't know and maybe it is just me, but it seems there is no thirst to want to know anything. Living in a box and can't see further than that. Not every soul, thank God, and now is the time for His knowledge to abound! Those that are hungry and thirsty are filled!
Comment from Jean Lutz1
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Praying for a six string to adorn this thought provoking piece. It looks like Communism has arrived. Like sin it conquers from within. Now it is up to We, the people to take a stand or lose our land.

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
    Thank you for your time reviewing this writing. It is unbelievable, no doubt. I ask everyday what far fetched upside down event, news, behavior, and alike will knock today. Life being divided at it's core. May those that are fully awake help awaken the sleepy before there truly is No More "We the people". Instead it will be "We Own You". Not much difference except when you come into the knowledge, you have no excuse. Now you know you have been a slave in this system.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
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Basic America will never disappear. There are those who think they have the answer with a new way, but beware the traps lurking 'round every corner. Who are these people who have nothing more to do than to try to repair something that doesn't need fixing? Your poem asks the right questions.

Ralf

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
    Thank you for your time reviewing this writing. Truth is stranger than fiction and traps are set and more everyday. If the owner of the house knew what time the thief was coming, he would prepare! Thanks again and enjoy your weekend and upcoming week!
Comment from amahra
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I really like what you wrote. And I believe God is allowing the enemy to play its hand. You know those old movies when the crook thinks he's gotten away, he starts bragging and getting sloppy, not knowing outside his remain, he's surrounding.

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
    Thank you for your time reviewing this writing. Yes, God still has reign on the darkness. We know that will not be so always. He gives full power to them and it could be very soon. We need to vibrate together on a frequency that breaks barriers and keeps harmony. Greater is He within us then he outside in the world. Thank you again and have a great weekend and upcoming week.
reply by amahra on 11-Jun-2021
Comment from royowen
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I think it's clearly the "end of days". There's little doubt about, environment "experts" think we can save the world by changing rules of engagement, but all they'll do it, apply pressure, it's the heart that needs changing, and generations of people who continue in their selfish ways, even experts fly in planes, the worst source of pollution, giving their hypocritical lectures, exchanging one religion fo another. Beautifully written my friend, articulate, well rhymed, and well presented, blessings Roy
Typo .: You body(,) an avatar.

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
    Thank you again Roy for your time reviewing this writing. We now that he comes to change times and laws. No doubt the heart has, is and will be what matters at the end. People should examine their heart for this is what God looks at. Other than yourself and God does anyone else know what kind of heart your soul houses. "Appear as you are and be as you appear". Rumi
reply by royowen on 11-Jun-2021
    I don?t even trust my own heart, but God?s, we are supposed to be on His side, not the other way around.
Comment from Janet Foor
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America certainly is in a quandary. And if you speak about it to some people, you are a hater and just don't understand.
Your poem speaks clearly the problem. People do perish for lack of knowledge and vision.

Well done.
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021
    Thank you Janet for your time and review. I apologize for taking longer than I desired to respond and tell you I appreciate you and all those that give of their time. Yes ma'am, it is heart wrenching to know that nobody desires for truth, a desire God would like to have in our inward man. Thanks again!
Comment from AnnaLinda
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Jennifer,

Yes, praying for Godly discernment is a must. Thank God we have the Holy Spirit of truth to guide us, direct us, help us and protect us...if we come out of/turn off the world system.

Excellent rhymes and flow here. Interesting how you used as above so below, as it clearly has occultic roots.

I agree with your thoughts here. As far as Nineveh goes...Jesus said that all the blood of the prophets would be avenged in the final days.
That it would be more tolerable for Sodom and Gamorah than it would be for us...unless a true follower of Jesus...in which case death has no power.

Sadly, their will be much weeping and knashing of teeth...when the door is closed on those that thought they followed Christ...

Anna

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021
    Anna, thank you so much for your time and your review. It is appreciated more than you know. We are certainly living in an age and time just like those days, as well as the days of Noah. Ignorance certainly is not bliss and we all know the road to hell is paved with good intentions. Good deeds will not do it either. That broken and contrite heart and that Godly sorrow that brings repentance, now, that will do it! Have a good one and thank you again.