Come and play with me!
79 word personal ad11 total reviews
Comment from Jill McCauslin
I think you could get some good dates with this! It's good. I love the line, "SO unattached male (unattached to couch, lucky underwear, spork collection, or another partner)." That is so real about online dating. I really get a sense of you. Good luck with the contest!
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2021
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I think you could get some good dates with this! It's good. I love the line, "SO unattached male (unattached to couch, lucky underwear, spork collection, or another partner)." That is so real about online dating. I really get a sense of you. Good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 07-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2021
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Thank you. Your kind comments are appreciated.
Comment from equestrik
This is a good presentation for the on-line personal ad contest. As a teacher, I can relate. This is a really clever ad. Well done and best of luck to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2021
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This is a good presentation for the on-line personal ad contest. As a teacher, I can relate. This is a really clever ad. Well done and best of luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your nice review and for taking the time to read my work. It is appreciated.
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
This is really so cute and funny. You nailed it with this one! Tell me...is that loft for rent? It is just exactly the amount of space I need to live in. Seriously. Your last line is just great. Wish you great luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2021
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This is really so cute and funny. You nailed it with this one! Tell me...is that loft for rent? It is just exactly the amount of space I need to live in. Seriously. Your last line is just great. Wish you great luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2021
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. It's appreciated.
Comment from Wendy G
I enjoyed this piece of writing, almost like a child looking for a new playmate in the last paragraph, but realistic in the first ones. Good wishes for your entry.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2021
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I enjoyed this piece of writing, almost like a child looking for a new playmate in the last paragraph, but realistic in the first ones. Good wishes for your entry.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2021
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem. Your time and comments are appreciated.
Comment from Patty Palmer
I like the part of the ad where she insists that he work for a chocolate factory or some ice cream place. Any sweet treat job would do. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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I like the part of the ad where she insists that he work for a chocolate factory or some ice cream place. Any sweet treat job would do. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 07-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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Thank you. I appreciate your comments and review.
Comment from Earl Corp
This was comical as all get out. Would a souvenir spoon collection be looked at the same way a spork collection is? I'll give up my sporks but the ketchup and mustard packets have to stay. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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This was comical as all get out. Would a souvenir spoon collection be looked at the same way a spork collection is? I'll give up my sporks but the ketchup and mustard packets have to stay. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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Ha ha well, no. No condiment packets either. Thank you so much for your review and comments. I'm glad you liked my fictional personal ad. :-)
Comment from AnnaLinda
Haha!
Not sure about playing with others these days. I know what you were getting at.
Spork collection addition is funny. Oh, you need him working so he won't be around during the day? Goid idea!
Not sure about the ice cream, coffee or chocolate mfg...Haha He might think you're fat.
Super entry. It's humorous, creative and good luck.
Anna
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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Haha!
Not sure about playing with others these days. I know what you were getting at.
Spork collection addition is funny. Oh, you need him working so he won't be around during the day? Goid idea!
Not sure about the ice cream, coffee or chocolate mfg...Haha He might think you're fat.
Super entry. It's humorous, creative and good luck.
Anna
Comment Written 06-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your comments and review. I'm glad you liked my fictional personal ad.
Comment from Sharon Davis
This 79 word piece is creative online ad, humerous theme and well composed.
An enjoyable read, thanks for sharing this work.
Nicely done. Well presented.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2021
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This 79 word piece is creative online ad, humerous theme and well composed.
An enjoyable read, thanks for sharing this work.
Nicely done. Well presented.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your comments and for your time. I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from Jane Graille
This is a clever, fun and cute ad. You have concisely provided clarity of a character and what type of person she is in search of. A nicely done short piece.
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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2021
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This is a clever, fun and cute ad. You have concisely provided clarity of a character and what type of person she is in search of. A nicely done short piece.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your comments and review. Could you please tell me for what you took stars away? What can I improve upon, in your opinion? thanks again. Hugs.
Comment from Raul1
I like your personal ad it is interesting and entertaining. You have written it well. It's beautifully written. Excellent work! Thank you for sharing! I like it.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2021
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I like your personal ad it is interesting and entertaining. You have written it well. It's beautifully written. Excellent work! Thank you for sharing! I like it.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2021
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Thank you very much for your complementary review and for taking the time to read my work. I appreciate it. Hugs.
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You're welcome!
