Comment from RodG

Excellent

There is a a tremendous amount of narrative packed in these 50 words. She claims to have "made a horrible mistake" but he seems on the verge of making one, too, if he seriously considers cheating on his fiancé. Rod

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2021

Maybe for a long lost love. I don't know what do you think. Thanks for the read and the feedback.

reply by RodG on 03-Jun-2021

I think LUST not LOVE will determine the outcome.

reply by the author on 03-Jun-2021

Both four-letter words. There is an answer, but I'm not telling. Better if the reader decides, don't you think?

Comment from roof35

Excellent

A very well done story in just fifty words. It does leave a reader wondering as I am sure you intended. Your picture pairs well. This is very nicely done.

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2021

Thanks much for your read and your feedback. Appreciated.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Oh boy, I have been there in this situation and it isn't easy, but if someone leaves you once, they will do it again, steer clear, this is what I thought and I was right, much enjoyed, well written, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2021

Congrats, Dolly, on making an excellent life decision. Thanks for the read and the feedback.

Comment from simon331

Excellent

Interesting story. Indeed a life-altering decision, or not. In my experience, a re-heated soup doesn't taste the same. Good story. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2021

Hey, I like that re-heated idea. Thanks for the read and the feedback.