Running Blind
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Comment from Begin Again
So Olivia remembers bits and pieces but prefers to put things neatly out of sight...far out of sight... and wants to move forward to wedded bliss. And then, of course, our evil murderer has learned that fo paintings would be worth far more than one...and he shall start searching for Sally Law. Let's not forget that the search for Mike Lembowsky is underway as well... Many subplots that will cross cross their paths until they blend together. Marvelous and intriguing. Great chapter, Sally.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2021
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So Olivia remembers bits and pieces but prefers to put things neatly out of sight...far out of sight... and wants to move forward to wedded bliss. And then, of course, our evil murderer has learned that fo paintings would be worth far more than one...and he shall start searching for Sally Law. Let's not forget that the search for Mike Lembowsky is underway as well... Many subplots that will cross cross their paths until they blend together. Marvelous and intriguing. Great chapter, Sally.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment Written 06-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review, dear Carol. Blessings always,
Sal XOs...
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Smiles...loving the story!
Comment from Ric Myworld
Oops, looks like the young gal in the picture has been eating those watermelon seeds again. Reading another of your chapters is always a fine way to spend a lazy Sunday afternoon.
The(y) way he said it, implied a disability.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2021
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Oops, looks like the young gal in the picture has been eating those watermelon seeds again. Reading another of your chapters is always a fine way to spend a lazy Sunday afternoon.
The(y) way he said it, implied a disability.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review and stars, dear Ric. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs...
Comment from damommy
Well, that's the end of Duran. I wonder if Olivia is committing bigamy. If so, this is going to another problem to deal with. The barbeque sounds like such fun, but the sheriff has to see about wife. Good chapter. I can small the barbeque. 8-)
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2021
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Well, that's the end of Duran. I wonder if Olivia is committing bigamy. If so, this is going to another problem to deal with. The barbeque sounds like such fun, but the sheriff has to see about wife. Good chapter. I can small the barbeque. 8-)
Comment Written 06-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2021
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Yum! I love BBQ! So glad you enjoyed this. I appreciate the wonderful review and kind comments. Blessings always and congratulations on your stellar win! Sal XOs...
Comment from Ben Colder
Girl! You are something else. I think your writing could stop a Hurricane or make it change course. I have missed some, and it is hard to get back into the story's heart, but I will get there.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2021
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Girl! You are something else. I think your writing could stop a Hurricane or make it change course. I have missed some, and it is hard to get back into the story's heart, but I will get there.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review and generous stars. This means the world to me. Sending you my very best,.Sal XOs...
Comment from BethShelby
This is another excellent chapter in you story. Tony has no patience for waiting to get what he wants so he kills the man who hoped to get the painting for him and now he plans to go after it himself. I'm anxious to see how this will be resolved.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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This is another excellent chapter in you story. Tony has no patience for waiting to get what he wants so he kills the man who hoped to get the painting for him and now he plans to go after it himself. I'm anxious to see how this will be resolved.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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Thank you, dear Beth. I really appreciate the kind review of my book chapter. Blessings always, Sal XOs...
Comment from Ulla
Hi Sally, this is yet again a wonderful continuation to the story. I so enjoy reading it. You jump effortlessly from one scene to the other. I love it. So Olivia has just got married. Now what is to happen, I wonder. It's very well written. Al best to you, Ulla xxx
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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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Hi Sally, this is yet again a wonderful continuation to the story. I so enjoy reading it. You jump effortlessly from one scene to the other. I love it. So Olivia has just got married. Now what is to happen, I wonder. It's very well written. Al best to you, Ulla xxx
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Comment Written 06-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review, dear Ulla. Much appreciated and needed. Blessings always, Sal XOs...
Comment from barbara.wilkey
So is this Olivia the same Olivia that just got married? That is a little confusing. I am wondering who she really is and Sally going to figure all of this out? That's a silly question, of course she is.
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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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So is this Olivia the same Olivia that just got married? That is a little confusing. I am wondering who she really is and Sally going to figure all of this out? That's a silly question, of course she is.
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Comment Written 06-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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Olivia is the only Olivia, amnesiac Camille Jean-Baptiste. I'm sure the Blind Girl is on the scent with King. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs...
