wicked jealousy
a jealousy poem2 total reviews
Comment from Eternal Muse
A well written poem on the nature of jealousy. Some consider the obsession of jealousy a disease of the mind. It is certainly unhealthy, and selfish to boot. You brought it out well in your example.
Good imagery and visuals and the artistic presentation. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2021
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A well written poem on the nature of jealousy. Some consider the obsession of jealousy a disease of the mind. It is certainly unhealthy, and selfish to boot. You brought it out well in your example.
Good imagery and visuals and the artistic presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-May-2021
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2021
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Thanks for the thoughtful review, cheers, j
Comment from popedanalynn
The feel of jealously so intriguingly explained. Who hasn't let their brain wander into this vile emotion that eventually takes hold. The last paragraph reveals the creepy outcome, an unexpected twist.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2021
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The feel of jealously so intriguingly explained. Who hasn't let their brain wander into this vile emotion that eventually takes hold. The last paragraph reveals the creepy outcome, an unexpected twist.
Comment Written 31-May-2021
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2021
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Thanks for review.