Comment from kahpot

Excellent

I did not count syllables, I was taken by your words-a love STORY will continue as a team, it certainly is a two way street, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2021

Thank You so much for your review!

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This thirty-four-syllable poem, Long Lasting Love, has the required syllable count and makes the observation that a great relationship can stay that way when both parties work as a tem. Neat.

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2021

Thank you so much.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written 34 syllable poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words with some rhyme. Very nice imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. teri

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2021

Thank you so much it was fun putting this together. And I was able to use a picture that I took of my parents.

Comment from harmony13

Excellent

I found the words of this poem to clearly state a good relationship.
The author's words are clear, descriptive, interesting and creative. I
especially liked the words "live as a team". The poem flows and
connects well. The artwork is perfect and compliments this poem.

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2021

Thank you so much I appreciate it, it was fun putting this together and picking a picture of my parents for it.

Comment from equestrik

Excellent

This is a lovely presentation. I think the picture is sweet and goes well with your poem. I think many dream of this relationship but fail to work through the hard times to make it through.

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2021

Thank You for your feedback. I?m a rookie and just getting started on here. I?m learning so much. I took a screen shot of a video I took of my parents when they were teaching me a dance move.

Comment from Patty Palmer

Excellent

A good entry for this contest. Your words ring true. When first married, it's much fun and romance. If you stay true to your partner without disrespect or lies, you'll most likely have a long and happy life together. Good luck with the contest.
Patty

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2021

Thank You for the review and rating.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Long lasting love can nurture and bring great happiness and hold the key to long life too. I enjoyed your few uplifting and poignant words here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2021

Thank you Dolly

Comment from Sharon Davis

Excellent

An uplifting 34 syllable poem with some great advice- live as a team.

Well composed and presented.

The image included enhances the theme of the piece.

Thank you for sharing your work.

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2021

Thank You for your kind review

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Yes, I agree, Mystery Author. You did a good job with your contest entry. I like the rhyme, the picture is a good pairing, and your words carry a true message. Love doesn't just happen and then never change. It takes work, as you said, a team to reach your dream. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2021

Thank You so much Jan

Comment from wilbs

Excellent

only 34 syllables in total but contents is long lasting. I love the imagery as well gives the words a picture and your picture the voice, they compliment each other perfectly... Good luck!

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2021

Thank You so much! I?m brand new at this and I?m learning so much! The picture I took is of my parents on their dance floor.