The Fae Nation
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Underground Conversations"Still just a germ of an idea that the moment
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Comment from Adri7enne
I continue to enjoy your story. Amazing how the short, terse dialogue gets the information out and give your characters their distinct personalities. It's a fun read, Bob. It moves fast and easily holds my interest.Fun stuff.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2021
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I continue to enjoy your story. Amazing how the short, terse dialogue gets the information out and give your characters their distinct personalities. It's a fun read, Bob. It moves fast and easily holds my interest.Fun stuff.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2021
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Thanks. I appreciate it
Comment from Iza Deleanu
This passage made me laugh, dicrimination in the fae world:) "Creteus whirled on the leprechaun. "No, no. Don't apologise. You did what anyone with an ounce of pride, an ounce of dignity would do. They treat us like vermin, like rats. Well, sometimes rats bite. They need to understand that."
"Doesn't help me now though."
"No, no, indeed not. Do you have any other skills?"
"You mean apart from dancing a jig? No human is going to hire me, anyway, not now, even if I had a degree in accountancy."
"Tea's up," said George. Peter glanced at the bedside table. Two mugs steamed there. Creteus took them both without rising and passed one to Peter." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
reply by the author on 31-May-2021
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This passage made me laugh, dicrimination in the fae world:) "Creteus whirled on the leprechaun. "No, no. Don't apologise. You did what anyone with an ounce of pride, an ounce of dignity would do. They treat us like vermin, like rats. Well, sometimes rats bite. They need to understand that."
"Doesn't help me now though."
"No, no, indeed not. Do you have any other skills?"
"You mean apart from dancing a jig? No human is going to hire me, anyway, not now, even if I had a degree in accountancy."
"Tea's up," said George. Peter glanced at the bedside table. Two mugs steamed there. Creteus took them both without rising and passed one to Peter." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
Comment Written 30-May-2021
reply by the author on 31-May-2021
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Thanks for the review. Glad it got a laugh
Comment from robyn corum
Bob,
Hmmm... Okay. This thing with George seems to be turning out in a positive way. He has him a nice room with all the amenities that he absolutely needs. Good. But I do not understand how Creteus fits in to this. He wasn't there when Peter first arrived and George didn't say anything (that I remember) about already having a roommate (did he?).
Though I am glad he has given Peter a job of sorts - that is a good turn of events for sure - I'm a bit concerned with where it may lead. I will be watching to seeeeee..... you can bet that. Uh huh.
BTW, I have been meaning to ask you and always forget. Where did the name Snodlander come from?
Thanks so much!
reply by the author on 30-May-2021
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Bob,
Hmmm... Okay. This thing with George seems to be turning out in a positive way. He has him a nice room with all the amenities that he absolutely needs. Good. But I do not understand how Creteus fits in to this. He wasn't there when Peter first arrived and George didn't say anything (that I remember) about already having a roommate (did he?).
Though I am glad he has given Peter a job of sorts - that is a good turn of events for sure - I'm a bit concerned with where it may lead. I will be watching to seeeeee..... you can bet that. Uh huh.
BTW, I have been meaning to ask you and always forget. Where did the name Snodlander come from?
Thanks so much!
Comment Written 30-May-2021
reply by the author on 30-May-2021
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Creteus was there at the end of the last chapter. I had it in mind that he was just visiting. George may or may not have told Creteus about Peter's situation and Creteus saw an opportunity to recruit him.
As far as my nickname is concerned, I used to live in a village called Snodland, hence I am the Snodlander (there can be only one)
many thanks as always for your review.