Heaven's Bliss
Two love birds in love.2 total reviews
Comment from lancellot
This is very cute and you did a good job making the presentation add to the poem's theme. I would look at the second line again. It feels just a bit off for some reason.
I wish you luck in the contest
reply by the author on 29-May-2021
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This is very cute and you did a good job making the presentation add to the poem's theme. I would look at the second line again. It feels just a bit off for some reason.
I wish you luck in the contest
Comment Written 29-May-2021
reply by the author on 29-May-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I recently saw two pigeons engaging with each other on the fence and I videoed it for my daughters, they were playful and kissing each other, it was wonderful, your poem reminded me of it, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-May-2021
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I recently saw two pigeons engaging with each other on the fence and I videoed it for my daughters, they were playful and kissing each other, it was wonderful, your poem reminded me of it, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-May-2021
reply by the author on 29-May-2021
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Thank you!