Comment from Jill McCauslin

Excellent

I like this a lot. I like that it's about the other person being in love instead of the traditional how I love you kind of poem. The picture goes really well with it too.

 Comment Written 29-May-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2021

Don't tell, but it was my mom I was thinking of and how her eyes light up to see me, bless.
Thanks for the review, cheers.

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Dear Mystery Writer,

How sweet! So often these poems are written from the perspective of the one DOING the loving. *smile* I do like this change and different perspective.

Can you imagine (actually, I hope this poem is based on fact!) what it would be like to walk in a room and see your lover's eyes light up like this? How sweet! How romantic! And what a bedrock of safety and security.

A wonderful offering for the contest. A unique and unusual poem, for sure. Your syllables are just right and I really enjoyed your take on this one. Thanks and good luck!

 Comment Written 29-May-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2021

Thanks for the thoughtful review, cheers.

Comment from Sharon Davis

Excellent

This 5-7-5 Romance poem is well presented and is accompanied by an image that highlights the poem's theme and tone.

Thank you for sharing this work. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 29-May-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2021

Thanks for the review, ain't love grand?

Comment from Carol Clark2

Excellent

This is a lovely 5-7-5 for the contest. I like that the love blooms when you enter the room. Good rhyme and a good message in these few syllables. Best wishes in the contest. Carol

 Comment Written 29-May-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2021

Thanks for the review, cheers, j

reply by Carol Clark2 on 14-Jun-2021

You're welcome. Carol