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Aiona's Poems

Viewing comments for Chapter 124 "My Yarn!"
Because my portfolio is too messy and I have OCD.

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Comment from lyenochka
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Lol. Oh, now I'm concerned. I'll keep my yarn and ribbons locked up! What's with cats and long stringy things. I had to hide my dracaena plant thanks to her chewing habits.

 Comment Written 27-May-2021


reply by the author on 28-May-2021
    Gosh, I never could have plants when I had cats. Speaking of which, I forgot to water my Christmas cactus!!! THANKS!
Comment from tfawcus
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Oh, dear! What an experience! I'm glad to hear that kitty survived. It must have been quite a worry for you. Anyway, you've managed to spin a great yarn out of it for the 2-4-2 contest. Good luck with your entry.

 Comment Written 27-May-2021


reply by the author on 29-May-2021
    Thanks for the review, tfawcus. Any suggestions for improvement?
reply by tfawcus on 29-May-2021
    No suggestions for improvement. It looks fine to me.
reply by tfawcus on 29-May-2021
    No suggestions for improvement. It looks fine to me.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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You made me smile here as the cat plays with a ball of wool and this is the result! I adore the sentiments here, this is playful and clever, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 27-May-2021


reply by the author on 29-May-2021
    Thank you, Dolly. Any suggestions for improvement?
reply by Dolly'sPoems on 29-May-2021
    No improvements, you cracked it here x