One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from juliaSjames
I very much enjoyed this tender haiku with its implied metaphor of parents saying goodnight to their little ones. I hope I will be able to perform this sweet ritual with my grandkids again, some time in the near future.
Excellent assonance and alliteration.
Beautiful presentation.
Stay safe healthy and blessed
Julia
reply by the author on 27-May-2021
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I very much enjoyed this tender haiku with its implied metaphor of parents saying goodnight to their little ones. I hope I will be able to perform this sweet ritual with my grandkids again, some time in the near future.
Excellent assonance and alliteration.
Beautiful presentation.
Stay safe healthy and blessed
Julia
Comment Written 27-May-2021
reply by the author on 27-May-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words. I'm glad it resonated with you.
Comment from kahpot
Very well said I can see the end of day comforting this plant, admittedly I am not really into plants , but your words describe this one wonderfully, very well presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 27-May-2021
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Very well said I can see the end of day comforting this plant, admittedly I am not really into plants , but your words describe this one wonderfully, very well presented****kahpot
Comment Written 27-May-2021
reply by the author on 27-May-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy Hugs
Comment from Gloria ....
Beautiful contemporary haiku. Even without the artwork, the image, emotion, and sense of serenity shine through.
Much enjoyed and the peonies are one of my favourite flowers. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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Beautiful contemporary haiku. Even without the artwork, the image, emotion, and sense of serenity shine through.
Much enjoyed and the peonies are one of my favourite flowers. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 26-May-2021
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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Thank you very much, Gloria :) may you have a wonderful night
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Comment from lyenochka
Lovely scene with the twilight kisses on nature. You illustrated it perfectly with your words and with your picture. I like the idea of the dusk tucking in the flowers at night. And bumble bees sleep in flowers so they're tucked in, too!
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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Lovely scene with the twilight kisses on nature. You illustrated it perfectly with your words and with your picture. I like the idea of the dusk tucking in the flowers at night. And bumble bees sleep in flowers so they're tucked in, too!
Comment Written 26-May-2021
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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I didn't know that about bees :) thank you very much, Helen.
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Comment from royowen
The differing light that comes in the morning, then the evening, and in between, the wonderful light of day, all cast a different hue on creation, well done, great post, blessings Gypsy, Roy
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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The differing light that comes in the morning, then the evening, and in between, the wonderful light of day, all cast a different hue on creation, well done, great post, blessings Gypsy, Roy
Comment Written 26-May-2021
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words, Roy.
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Most welcome
