Make Good Decisions
20 syllable commentary.16 total reviews
Comment from Dilettante junior
Dear Patty,
Been away, missed a few.
You made great use of your 20 syllables. I found positivity, truth, light, rhymes and sheer wisdom in your precious words. This could well be used as an inspiration on greeting cards, on billboards, bookmarks, bumper stickers :)
Well done,
Cheers,
DJ
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
Dear Patty,
Been away, missed a few.
You made great use of your 20 syllables. I found positivity, truth, light, rhymes and sheer wisdom in your precious words. This could well be used as an inspiration on greeting cards, on billboards, bookmarks, bumper stickers :)
Well done,
Cheers,
DJ
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your nice review.
Comment from dragonpoet
Patricia,
This flowing rhyming couplet give advice that everyone should follow. It seems some don't follow it though. I like the artwork. It seems to be a flowe with a strong backbone to fight against bad times.
Keep writnig and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 31-May-2021
Patricia,
This flowing rhyming couplet give advice that everyone should follow. It seems some don't follow it though. I like the artwork. It seems to be a flowe with a strong backbone to fight against bad times.
Keep writnig and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 31-May-2021
reply by the author on 31-May-2021
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Thank you for your review.
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You're welcome, Patricia.
Joan
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a lovely 20 syllable poem and a good life message It is when you are down it is sometimes difficult to stay on the positive path. This is a lovely bright presentation to read early Friday morning. Cheers valda
reply by the author on 27-May-2021
This is a lovely 20 syllable poem and a good life message It is when you are down it is sometimes difficult to stay on the positive path. This is a lovely bright presentation to read early Friday morning. Cheers valda
Comment Written 27-May-2021
reply by the author on 27-May-2021
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Thanks for your lovely review.
Comment from lyenochka
Those are wise words, Patricia! You met the syllable count perfectly while giving sound advice!
And I just bought your book via Kindle. So congratulations again on this accomplishment!!
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
Those are wise words, Patricia! You met the syllable count perfectly while giving sound advice!
And I just bought your book via Kindle. So congratulations again on this accomplishment!!
Comment Written 26-May-2021
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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Thanks for your kind review. Thanks to for buying my book.
Comment from jaded831
Words to live by, sometimes we over think things, and still make wrong decisions. If we think about the right thing to do, over the selfish thing to do, we should not have regrets. If our conscience is clear. God will smile.
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
Words to live by, sometimes we over think things, and still make wrong decisions. If we think about the right thing to do, over the selfish thing to do, we should not have regrets. If our conscience is clear. God will smile.
Comment Written 26-May-2021
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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Thanks for your kind review.
Comment from justafan
Hello there! I really like this! You put plenty of punch in 20 syllables. Well done my friend.
Thanks for sharing
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
Hello there! I really like this! You put plenty of punch in 20 syllables. Well done my friend.
Thanks for sharing
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
Comment Written 26-May-2021
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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Thanks for your kind review.
Comment from Sharon Davis
This 20 syllable commentary sends a clear directive, with some good advice.
Effective and efficient. Well composed and presented.
Nice job.
Thanks for sharing your work.
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
This 20 syllable commentary sends a clear directive, with some good advice.
Effective and efficient. Well composed and presented.
Nice job.
Thanks for sharing your work.
Comment Written 25-May-2021
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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Thanks for your kind review.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your 20 syllables make an awesome, and true, statement, Patricia. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I like the end rhymes, the beautiful image, and your clear message.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
Your 20 syllables make an awesome, and true, statement, Patricia. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I like the end rhymes, the beautiful image, and your clear message.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 25-May-2021
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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Thanks for your kind review.
Comment from Sugarray77
Wise words, Patricia. I enjoyed reading your philosophical verse that is accompanied by your own stunning artwork. The entire presentation is delightful. I wish you luck in the contest.
Melissa
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
Wise words, Patricia. I enjoyed reading your philosophical verse that is accompanied by your own stunning artwork. The entire presentation is delightful. I wish you luck in the contest.
Melissa
Comment Written 25-May-2021
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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Thanks for your kind review.
Comment from Ginnygray
Great 20 syllable advice here. It meets all of the requirements and is brightly formatted. Life can send us bumps in the road so in a panick, do not make unwise decisions that you will regret especially lifelong decisions that you will live with the rest of your life!
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
Great 20 syllable advice here. It meets all of the requirements and is brightly formatted. Life can send us bumps in the road so in a panick, do not make unwise decisions that you will regret especially lifelong decisions that you will live with the rest of your life!
Comment Written 25-May-2021
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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Thanks for your kind review.