The Fae Nation
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Moving Day"Still just a germ of an idea that the moment
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Comment from Adri7enne
I so enjoy reading you. It's like a little mini vacation in your mind. Lol! I used to feel the same way about Elmore Leonard. He was also a master at dialogues and he was always witty. Every new book of his was occasion for a celebration. Take the phone off the hook, lock the door, put out the "Do not disturb" sign. I feel the same way about your posts.I wish I could just keep reading. I don't read it looking for mistakes. Sorry, Bob. I just read it, selfishly, just for pure enjoyment and entertainment. Loved it. What in hell is Creteus doing on George's bed?
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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I so enjoy reading you. It's like a little mini vacation in your mind. Lol! I used to feel the same way about Elmore Leonard. He was also a master at dialogues and he was always witty. Every new book of his was occasion for a celebration. Take the phone off the hook, lock the door, put out the "Do not disturb" sign. I feel the same way about your posts.I wish I could just keep reading. I don't read it looking for mistakes. Sorry, Bob. I just read it, selfishly, just for pure enjoyment and entertainment. Loved it. What in hell is Creteus doing on George's bed?
Comment Written 26-May-2021
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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You flatter me, thanks
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Lol! Why bother! You're so immune to flattey! Lol!
Comment from Jay Squires
What a fascinating story and it's written by someone whose been around writing a while. You know your stuff: pacing, timing, a good strong protagonist that the reader can identify with, smooth transitions as you have him move from place to place. What little dialogue you had was handled well
I will certainly read any stories I come across in the future. Good job!
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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What a fascinating story and it's written by someone whose been around writing a while. You know your stuff: pacing, timing, a good strong protagonist that the reader can identify with, smooth transitions as you have him move from place to place. What little dialogue you had was handled well
I will certainly read any stories I come across in the future. Good job!
Comment Written 25-May-2021
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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You're very kind, thank you. Glad you liked it
Comment from robyn corum
Bob,
Ack! A new development. I don't know who this is, but I hope it's a friendly sort of fellow. Our Peter needs love and comfort at the moment. haha
Note:
--> But it was a point of principle now, so he gulped it down, rinse(d) and dried the mug
Thanks!
reply by the author on 25-May-2021
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Bob,
Ack! A new development. I don't know who this is, but I hope it's a friendly sort of fellow. Our Peter needs love and comfort at the moment. haha
Note:
--> But it was a point of principle now, so he gulped it down, rinse(d) and dried the mug
Thanks!
Comment Written 25-May-2021
reply by the author on 25-May-2021
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Oops, thanks for the spag. Creteus was introduced earlier in the book. Thanks for the review
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I'll have to use my brain, I suppose. Ick. hahaha
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He was the guy trying to organise and unite the fae
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Oh, yeah. Thanks.
