Renga Two
Viewing comments for Chapter 59 "Heart Memories"multi-author book number two
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Memories
by June Sargent
Hello, June,
I can always count on you to do the renga right. I really like your topic and last line. It's true for me too. There are people in my life that I will never forget. Well done!
Gypsy
reply by the author on 25-May-2021
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Memories
by June Sargent
Hello, June,
I can always count on you to do the renga right. I really like your topic and last line. It's true for me too. There are people in my life that I will never forget. Well done!
Gypsy
Comment Written 25-May-2021
reply by the author on 25-May-2021
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So glad you liked this addition to the book of Renga. Always a pleasure to write for your clubs.
Comment from Debbie Pope
This is a nice addition to the Renga. It brings to my mind the hardest challenge in life, which is to live in such a way that you do live on in someone's heart. I would love to use my time in such a way to leave my mark on many hearts, but one would be enough.
reply by the author on 25-May-2021
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This is a nice addition to the Renga. It brings to my mind the hardest challenge in life, which is to live in such a way that you do live on in someone's heart. I would love to use my time in such a way to leave my mark on many hearts, but one would be enough.
Comment Written 25-May-2021
reply by the author on 25-May-2021
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I'm glad you share the same sentiments. Always appreciate your feedback. Have a nice week!
Comment from Wendy G
This is a lovely Renga. Few words, but well-chosen and very meaningful and true. I like your choice of image- poppies for remembrance, an excellent accompaniment.
reply by the author on 25-May-2021
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This is a lovely Renga. Few words, but well-chosen and very meaningful and true. I like your choice of image- poppies for remembrance, an excellent accompaniment.
Comment Written 25-May-2021
reply by the author on 25-May-2021
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I adore the sentiment here June as we never forget our loved ones as they remain in our hearts as long as we live, the journey in life can be strewn with painful loss and grief, but we can retain the memories in our hearts forever, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-May-2021
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I adore the sentiment here June as we never forget our loved ones as they remain in our hearts as long as we live, the journey in life can be strewn with painful loss and grief, but we can retain the memories in our hearts forever, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-May-2021
reply by the author on 25-May-2021
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I'm glad you share these sentiments. Memories do keep our loved ones alive forever in our hearts.
Comment from Teri7
June, This is a very beautiful and well written short poem - Renga - you have penned for the multi author book. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 24-May-2021
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June, This is a very beautiful and well written short poem - Renga - you have penned for the multi author book. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 24-May-2021
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Comment from BethShelby
I like the sentiments expressed in the 5-7-5 poem. It is true that death cannot erase the impact our lives have had on others, especially the ones who love us.
reply by the author on 24-May-2021
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I like the sentiments expressed in the 5-7-5 poem. It is true that death cannot erase the impact our lives have had on others, especially the ones who love us.
Comment Written 24-May-2021
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Comment from Kerry Foley
Hello there June, this is a lovely renga addition to the book. Beautifully done my friend. Enjoy your day.
-Kerry
reply by the author on 24-May-2021
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Hello there June, this is a lovely renga addition to the book. Beautifully done my friend. Enjoy your day.
-Kerry
Comment Written 24-May-2021
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Comment from lyenochka
Ah, good to know the meaning of poppies - no wonder the "Flanders Field" poem. Great message in your renga poem. As we remember our loved ones they are alive to us.
reply by the author on 24-May-2021
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Ah, good to know the meaning of poppies - no wonder the "Flanders Field" poem. Great message in your renga poem. As we remember our loved ones they are alive to us.
Comment Written 24-May-2021
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Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Memories, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that immortality is not lived, it is remembered from heart to heart.
reply by the author on 24-May-2021
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This 5-7-5, Memories, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that immortality is not lived, it is remembered from heart to heart.
Comment Written 24-May-2021
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Comment from Sharon Davis
An interesting form of poetry - Renta. Adding to a piece that has been written by a different poet. This 5-7-5 piece is effectively composed and nicely presented. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-May-2021
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An interesting form of poetry - Renta. Adding to a piece that has been written by a different poet. This 5-7-5 piece is effectively composed and nicely presented. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 24-May-2021
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