Comment from Father Flaps

Exceptional

Hi Debra,
Isn't that something? A perfect diamond formed from those little babies! Nice family photo for the contest, and a fine haiku to match.
I especially enjoyed your alliteration in the second line,
"supervised synchronized swim". The two 3-syllable adjectives work very well together.
The photo reminds me of a synchronized swimming team. They all look alike, and of course so do these goslings. If they were wearing swim caps, it would be awesome. But I suppose they'd be hard to catch to put them on. And dangerous, too! Geese aren't afraid of anything.
Nicely penned! And good luck in the contest!
Hugs,
Kimbob

 Comment Written 29-May-2021

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2021

Hi Kimbob :)
Thanks so much for your lovely feedback and also for the generous star award!
Just stopped by after a few days off site (how life takes over!) and your review is the first thing I saw - you made my day! Thank you x

Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick

Excellent

This is a beautifully written poem for take a photo entry. Mother Goose and her goslings how sweet. Beautiful presentation. Very well done. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 25-May-2021

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reply by the author on 27-May-2021

Thank you so much, Joanne :)
Best wishes, Debra

reply by Joanne Gill-Maddick on 27-May-2021

Your welcome

Comment from Kerry Foley

Excellent

Hello there Debra, it's nice to read you again. This is a lovely photo paired with a wonderful poem. You have nice alliteration throughout. Good luck to you!
-Kerry

 Comment Written 24-May-2021

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reply by the author on 25-May-2021

Thanks so much for your lovely feedback, Kerry :)
Best wishes, Debra

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

It's funny to watch ducks peacefully glide across the water and think about how furiously their feet are paddling beneath the surface. Another one of God's wonderful creations.

 Comment Written 24-May-2021

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reply by the author on 25-May-2021

Thanks, Thomas :)
Best wishes, Debra

Comment from Aussie

Exceptional

A beautiful photo of avian family. You have a good camera, maybe dad is swimming behind. I think you have a great entry for the contest and wish you well. Geese are funny, especially when the traffic stops to let them cross the road! Blessings, Kay xx

 Comment Written 24-May-2021

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reply by the author on 25-May-2021

Thank you so much, Aussie, for your lovely feedback and generous star rating. I really appreciate both :) Best wishes as always, Debra

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Exceptional

This is an amazing award winning photo Debra! Is the drake in the lead? Your words are magical here and I enjoyed this presentation so much, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 23-May-2021

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reply by the author on 25-May-2021

Thank you so much, Dolly, for your lovely feedback and generous star rating. I really appreciate both :) Best wishes as always, Debra x

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

I think that this poem should win the contest. Beautiful images of the ducks swimming in the lake. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 23-May-2021

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reply by the author on 25-May-2021

Thanks for your lovely feedback, Raul. Best wishes, Debra :)

reply by Raul1 on 25-May-2021

You're welcome

Comment from justafan

Excellent

They knew they were going to be famous :)
I love the picture and the poetry. I also love how you have presented your work. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest.

Always
Justafan
Missy

 Comment Written 23-May-2021

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reply by the author on 25-May-2021

Thanks so much, Missy, for your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra :)

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very nice photo and
presentation, Debra.
-We have two geese poems
and one albatross poem
for today!
-You wrote a good haiku
for your photo.
-You paint a vivid word
picture of the scene with
the "synchronized swim"
and end with a good satori line.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 23-May-2021

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reply by the author on 25-May-2021

Thanks for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes, Pam. Best wishes to you as always, Debra :)

reply by Pam (respa) on 25-May-2021

You are very welcome, Debra.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Graceful Gaggle
by Debra White

Hello, Debra,

Great contemporary haiku about goslings. Nice alliteration. Good syllables count.

Good luck in the contest.

Gypsy hugs

 Comment Written 23-May-2021

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reply by the author on 24-May-2021

Hi Gypsy, thank you for your feedback and good luck wishes - I appreciate both :)
Best wishes as always, Debra
Ps: My poem isn?t a tanka! It?s a 5/7/5 :)

reply by Gypsy Blue Rose on 25-May-2021

I'm so sorry. I changed my review. For some reason I read tanka, but it was 'take'