Tebow Challenge
A Second Chance?3 total reviews
Comment from Pj Dennison
You have two well written stanzas of free verse poetry. These stanzas are philosophical and maybe even seem a bit prophetic. Nevertheless, your writing is excellent. I would of liked to see a little more of this poem as it seems like just a start. Best wishes on your future writing endeavors.
reply by the author on 23-May-2021
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You have two well written stanzas of free verse poetry. These stanzas are philosophical and maybe even seem a bit prophetic. Nevertheless, your writing is excellent. I would of liked to see a little more of this poem as it seems like just a start. Best wishes on your future writing endeavors.
Comment Written 23-May-2021
reply by the author on 23-May-2021
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Thanks
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You are welcome
Comment from Leann DS
At first, I did not fully understand what you were saying, but the notes made it clear. Thank you for sharing those notes. The portion you wrote was well written and I noticed no errors in spelling or grammar. Could you include your notes in the actual writing? I'm not sure if this has a word limit, but I think the notes would fit well within the essay. Have a great day.
reply by the author on 23-May-2021
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At first, I did not fully understand what you were saying, but the notes made it clear. Thank you for sharing those notes. The portion you wrote was well written and I noticed no errors in spelling or grammar. Could you include your notes in the actual writing? I'm not sure if this has a word limit, but I think the notes would fit well within the essay. Have a great day.
Comment Written 23-May-2021
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Thanks
Comment from Bonnie Seach
The Devil sets the pattern for the pulpit bullies. They are his devout followers. He will soon be put away and they will go with him. Feel compassion for them, no longer dismay. They'll soon be out of the way.
Thanks for sharing your well written, emotive protest. Wishing you much success
reply by the author on 23-May-2021
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The Devil sets the pattern for the pulpit bullies. They are his devout followers. He will soon be put away and they will go with him. Feel compassion for them, no longer dismay. They'll soon be out of the way.
Thanks for sharing your well written, emotive protest. Wishing you much success
Comment Written 23-May-2021
reply by the author on 23-May-2021
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Thanks
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Go well with your writing. Best wishes
