Aiona's Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 116 "Heyoka"Because my portfolio is too messy and I have OCD.
2 total reviews
Comment from Gregory Lambert
This poem says a lot in 20 syllables. I like that the message isn't obvious. Nice word choice and the rhymes work well. Best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 23-May-2021
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This poem says a lot in 20 syllables. I like that the message isn't obvious. Nice word choice and the rhymes work well. Best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 22-May-2021
reply by the author on 23-May-2021
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Thanks, Gregory.
Comment from tfawcus
How interesting. I think most cultures have a figure like that in their stories - a jester or a clown or a trickster. It's fascinating how much crossover there is between myths and legends across the world. Thanks for posting this. Much enjoyed.
reply by the author on 23-May-2021
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How interesting. I think most cultures have a figure like that in their stories - a jester or a clown or a trickster. It's fascinating how much crossover there is between myths and legends across the world. Thanks for posting this. Much enjoyed.
Comment Written 22-May-2021
reply by the author on 23-May-2021
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True, there is a jester/trickster/sage in most cultures, isn't there? :) Thanks for the review. I just learned this word recently. Can't remember how. I think it popped up in one of my YouTube ads. LOL!
