The True Vine
Jesus4 total reviews
Comment from Carol Clark2
This is a great 2-4-6 poem for the contest. It has a powerful message packed in those few words. Good rhyming as well. Best wishes in the contest. Carol
reply by the author on 23-May-2021
This is a great 2-4-6 poem for the contest. It has a powerful message packed in those few words. Good rhyming as well. Best wishes in the contest. Carol
Comment Written 23-May-2021
reply by the author on 23-May-2021
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Thanks so much for your review and best wishes.
Blessings...
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You're welcome. I hope it does well in the contest. Carol
Comment from Anne Johnston
A great entry for this contest. Jesus is the true vine, His coming was planned from the beginning and He is the only way to salvation. So glad He loved us so much that He came to make a way for us.
reply by the author on 23-May-2021
A great entry for this contest. Jesus is the true vine, His coming was planned from the beginning and He is the only way to salvation. So glad He loved us so much that He came to make a way for us.
Comment Written 23-May-2021
reply by the author on 23-May-2021
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Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments.
Blessings
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You are welcome
Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-4-6, The True Vine, has the right set up and reminds the readers of the passage from Matthew that connects Abraham and Jesus through their bloodline.
reply by the author on 22-May-2021
This 2-4-6, The True Vine, has the right set up and reminds the readers of the passage from Matthew that connects Abraham and Jesus through their bloodline.
Comment Written 22-May-2021
reply by the author on 22-May-2021
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Thank you for your review and comments.
Have a great day.
Comment from nor84
I wanted to give you a heads-up. It pays to read the contest announcement all the way through. Otherwise, you can lose your deposit.
This announcement says: Write a 2-4-6 syllable poem. It has three lines. The first line has 2 syllables, the second one 4 syllables and the last line 6 syllable. The subject can be anything. HOWEVER, THE THREE LINES HAVE TO RHYME.
Maybe you still have time to fix the lines that don't rhyme. Good luck.
reply by the author on 21-May-2021
I wanted to give you a heads-up. It pays to read the contest announcement all the way through. Otherwise, you can lose your deposit.
This announcement says: Write a 2-4-6 syllable poem. It has three lines. The first line has 2 syllables, the second one 4 syllables and the last line 6 syllable. The subject can be anything. HOWEVER, THE THREE LINES HAVE TO RHYME.
Maybe you still have time to fix the lines that don't rhyme. Good luck.
Comment Written 21-May-2021
reply by the author on 21-May-2021
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Thanks for your review and the heads up; I sure did miss the part about the rhyming.
Blessings...