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A Puppy May Not Be A Dog

Lonely puppies may not be what they seem to be.

3 total reviews 
Comment from Begin Again
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Oh, Harry... Now, who could refuse a cute lost puppy. this kind of vampire I could like... Though you might be a naughty puppy too. The story was imaginative, cute, and believable ...till the sympathetic divorce lawyer. LOL

 Comment Written 22-May-2021

reply by the author on 22-May-2021
    Thank you for your read and encouraging feedback. Oh, well had to throw some fantasy in the story re: sympathetic divorce lawyer.
Comment from Earl Corp
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This is better than the other vampire story I read which had the vampire feeding off of zits. I like it's normal form is a divorce lawyer, nice twist. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-May-2021

reply by the author on 21-May-2021
    Thanks for the read and feedback. Happy you liked the lawyer twist.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This story, A Puppy May Not Be a Dog, answers a lot of questions bout alternative vampires. Of course the lawyer reminds us that blood suckers still exist.

 Comment Written 21-May-2021

reply by the author on 21-May-2021
    Yes, but some can be a..-licker too. Thanks for the read and review.