Stronger
Exercise7 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Weight training is underrated and we all should do it whether we are male or female at any age, building muscle helps support our bones and encourages us to live longer, I enjoyed your few words here Jade, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-May-2021
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Weight training is underrated and we all should do it whether we are male or female at any age, building muscle helps support our bones and encourages us to live longer, I enjoyed your few words here Jade, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-May-2021
reply by the author on 22-May-2021
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Thank you so much, your review means so much.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is very clever. Without the picture I would have had a multitude of potential objects teeming through my mind to go with the poem. My favourite would have been his girlfriend.
reply by the author on 22-May-2021
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This is very clever. Without the picture I would have had a multitude of potential objects teeming through my mind to go with the poem. My favourite would have been his girlfriend.
Comment Written 21-May-2021
reply by the author on 22-May-2021
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Glad you got my little twist, I wanted it to have a sexual tone. Both make us feel good when done. Thanks for your wonderful review.
Comment from Kathleen S.
Well, this poem reminds me of not only the physical exercise that might be happening, like seen in the picture, but also of how us writers might be sweating, as we plug away at words, trying to find more writing strength in the practice of staying active in pursuit of a writing dream. :) (of course, that could just be me.. :) )
reply by the author on 22-May-2021
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Well, this poem reminds me of not only the physical exercise that might be happening, like seen in the picture, but also of how us writers might be sweating, as we plug away at words, trying to find more writing strength in the practice of staying active in pursuit of a writing dream. :) (of course, that could just be me.. :) )
Comment Written 21-May-2021
reply by the author on 22-May-2021
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Thank you for your wonderful review.
Comment from Bonnie Seach
Contest ready. An interesting idea. Bodily training is good up to a point. Some people do become obsessed with themselves if not careful. If you look after your body for the first 40 years it will look after you for the next 40 years.
Best wishes and every success
reply by the author on 22-May-2021
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Contest ready. An interesting idea. Bodily training is good up to a point. Some people do become obsessed with themselves if not careful. If you look after your body for the first 40 years it will look after you for the next 40 years.
Best wishes and every success
Comment Written 21-May-2021
reply by the author on 22-May-2021
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Excellent words to live by. Thank you for your encouraging review.
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Do you do pressups, lifts and all that sort of thing? I am impressed!
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No, no longer have the energy, at my age stretching is all I can do, and light weights.
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That's amazing! Keep fit, keep well and keep in touch😅👏
Comment from Earl Corp
I'm not sure if the picture is supposed to depict what you're describing or not. The CEC committee is sometimes touchy about that stuff. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-May-2021
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I'm not sure if the picture is supposed to depict what you're describing or not. The CEC committee is sometimes touchy about that stuff. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-May-2021
reply by the author on 22-May-2021
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It is what it is. Thank you for your review.
Comment from amahra
This is a fine poem but I thought a Haiku is always supposed to be about nature. You know, things dealing with animals, the sea, trees, mountains, and plant life. But, good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-May-2021
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This is a fine poem but I thought a Haiku is always supposed to be about nature. You know, things dealing with animals, the sea, trees, mountains, and plant life. But, good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-May-2021
reply by the author on 22-May-2021
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The contest is in the haiku style, about anything. Thank you for your review.
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I meant no disrespect, and I know you were simply following the contest guidelines. But it's difficult when you know what you know: I googled the definition for you:
Senryu is a Japanese form of short poetry similar to haiku in construction: three lines with 17 or fewer morae (or on) in total. However, senryu tend to be about human foibles while haiku tend to be about nature, and senryu are often cynical or darkly humorous while haiku are more serious.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Stronger, has the proper formatting and finds a man engaging with a dumbbell a she defies ghravity again and again.
reply by the author on 22-May-2021
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This 5-7-5, Stronger, has the proper formatting and finds a man engaging with a dumbbell a she defies ghravity again and again.
Comment Written 21-May-2021
reply by the author on 22-May-2021
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Thank you for your review.