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The Corona saga

Viewing comments for Chapter 111 "Letters to C..."
to keep my sanity in time of pandemic

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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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Yeah, you wonder why the virus did enter the U.S., too. It has been a rough year but things are getting better each day. We have to think positive, its the only way to go.

 Comment Written 11-Jun-2021

Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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It does seem a bit like an illusion when we look at our past life and how we connected with others and enjoyed good company, let us hope we return to normal soon, we humans are forever hopeful, much enjoyed Iza, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 26-May-2021

Comment from Robert Zimmerman
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Hello Iza

You are pointing out that Ms. C is causing a lot of trouble between people. Since she is such a troublemaker we should encourage her to leave.

Don't give her a map. That way she can't come back.

Robert

 Comment Written 23-May-2021

Comment from Alaskastory
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"Letters to C..." in an interesting part in Ms. C. struggle to get along with friends and to consider alternatives. This looks like good progress in your book The Corona saga.

error: "...make me gave (give) my one hundred..."

 Comment Written 22-May-2021

Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I am positive that with God's help everything will work out the way it should. I don't understand the mysterious workings of God but I do have faith that His will will always come forth.

 Comment Written 22-May-2021

Comment from Gregory Lambert
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Your chapter expresses well, many of the thoughts and feelings that I too have had during this year of covid. You manage to say a lot and make me think a lot for just a few short paragraphs. The paragraphs flow together nicely and I especially like the way you set it all up as a letter to express your thoughts. Very nice indeed!

 Comment Written 22-May-2021

Comment from estory
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I think its an interesting premise, to personalize the corona virus, and write this letter to her as if she were a real person, a kind of evil wizard weaving this spell over us all. I like the end, when you ask why it came here. Why. That is often the unanswered question we all ponder. Why do these things happen? Jesus once said: "It is necessary that temptation comes, but woe to the one by which it comes." estory

 Comment Written 21-May-2021

Comment from Begin Again
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make me gave my one hundred percent daily.

why have you choose to come here.

Covid has definitely played a number on all our lives and seems to want to hang on no matter how hard we struggle to rid ourselves. Well done. Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 21-May-2021

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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Startling rendering of lament as addressed to the Evil Queen Coronella. Who is the "bad friend" that "she" kept you from? Whoever, couldn't be as bad as she is!

 Comment Written 20-May-2021

Comment from lyenochka
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I'm sorry that work has been so stressful. I guess all relationships have been affected by Miss Coronella. I hope as the virus dies down, more normal behavior will return.

 Comment Written 20-May-2021