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Broken Man

A man who messed himself up.

3 total reviews 
Comment from karenina
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Great image, intense poetic thought...my trusty syllable counter online tells me everything is three syllables...which would make this 2-11-2 rather than 2-10-2... You could whip out your poetic license and edit it to "ev'rything" right quick and be right on the perfect count!---Karenina

 Comment Written 21-May-2021

reply by the author on 21-May-2021
    Thank you! I did what you suggested. Thanks for your help!
reply by karenina on 21-May-2021
    NO problem! I've been saved in the nick of time on plenty of occasions!---Cheers!--Karenina
Comment from Sally Law
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FanStory Fantastic! I'm so sorry for no six today. Please accept my five and best wishes for the con win. Sending you my best today as always. A shoe in.
Sal :))

 Comment Written 20-May-2021

reply by the author on 20-May-2021
    Thank you! :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This does unfortunately happen in life and I know of a few people who have lost everything and had to start all over again, if they are young enough restart then they usually do well, I enjoyed your words, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 20-May-2021

reply by the author on 20-May-2021
    Thank you!