Artistry
4-8-4 Poem8 total reviews
Comment from TammyRenee
This is a great reminder and something I'm finding out. I love the choice of imagery, you have chosen to go with it.
Good luck, great work
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This is a great reminder and something I'm finding out. I love the choice of imagery, you have chosen to go with it.
Good luck, great work
Comment Written 21-May-2021
Comment from Gregory Lambert
Very nice 4-8-4 poem. I like that each line stands on its own, but all three contribute to the storyline. No unnecessary words and as a bonus, all three lines rhyme. Well done!
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Very nice 4-8-4 poem. I like that each line stands on its own, but all three contribute to the storyline. No unnecessary words and as a bonus, all three lines rhyme. Well done!
Comment Written 20-May-2021
Comment from Janaethepoet
I like this. from it, I can tell that you might love to draw and/or paint. It is probably something you are very passionate about. keep making poetry about your passions! It is when the best poetry is created.
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I like this. from it, I can tell that you might love to draw and/or paint. It is probably something you are very passionate about. keep making poetry about your passions! It is when the best poetry is created.
Comment Written 20-May-2021
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and
presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-I like the opening line,
followed by the result
of using "word artistry."
-A good concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
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-Nice artwork and
presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-I like the opening line,
followed by the result
of using "word artistry."
-A good concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-May-2021
Comment from Ashlyn Stone
Seemed to followed the writing prompt. It rhymed and flowed very well. There were no grammatical errors. Hope to read more of your writing. Keep up the good work.
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Seemed to followed the writing prompt. It rhymed and flowed very well. There were no grammatical errors. Hope to read more of your writing. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 20-May-2021
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This 4-8-4 poem contest entry speaks the need and appropriate or artistic use of words makes a poem readable; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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This 4-8-4 poem contest entry speaks the need and appropriate or artistic use of words makes a poem readable; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 20-May-2021
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of your sixteen syllables in this thought-provoking commentary on our poetic endeavors. Sometimes we smile and say "Ahh, success." Sometimes we frown and say, "Not what I intended"!
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You have made excellent use of your sixteen syllables in this thought-provoking commentary on our poetic endeavors. Sometimes we smile and say "Ahh, success." Sometimes we frown and say, "Not what I intended"!
Comment Written 20-May-2021
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Luck and skill are involved and a dash of meter, plus a little bit of experience and hey presto a poem is born, I enjoyed your uplifting words here, love Dolly x
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Luck and skill are involved and a dash of meter, plus a little bit of experience and hey presto a poem is born, I enjoyed your uplifting words here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-May-2021
