Comment from Bloomer Burbs

Excellent

Hi mystery writer

Pray on my plan,
rising I strive to live this day,
the best I can.
A philosophy of life which I can fully appreciate, bravo. Hopefully we all keep growing as a person.
Take care, Pete

 Comment Written 19-May-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2021

Thanks for the review Pete, things are getting better, cheers, j

reply by Bloomer Burbs on 14-Jun-2021

I hope you continue to get better.
Pete

reply by the author on 14-Jun-2021

Haha thanks for that, I am getting stronger and happier every day. waiting on my new e bike yay. Have a lucky day, j

Comment from Bonnie Seach

Excellent

Certainly an admirable concept and meaningful goal.
The poem conforms to contest rules
The imagery and presentation is pleasing
I wish you every success and happy writing.
Kindest regards

 Comment Written 19-May-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2021

Thanks for the thoughtful review Bonnie, cheers, j

reply by Bonnie Seach on 14-Jun-2021

Success and joy to you.

Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

I'm sorry I don't have any sixes left to give you for this, it should be a contest entry.. Very nice job. Thank you for sharing. Stay safe and stay healthy.

 Comment Written 19-May-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2021

Thanks for the review and phantom star Earl, cheers, j