Lunar light
Poem 4-8-44 total reviews
Comment from Janaethepoet
I really love the language you used in this poem. It really added to the imagery and made me feel like I was outside enjoying one of those beautiful starry nights where the moon is as bright as the sun.
reply by the author on 21-May-2021
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I really love the language you used in this poem. It really added to the imagery and made me feel like I was outside enjoying one of those beautiful starry nights where the moon is as bright as the sun.
Comment Written 20-May-2021
reply by the author on 21-May-2021
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Thanks for those encouraging words zanya
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image for your poem.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-Effective imagery of the
moon and its light, and
a good concluding line
referring to the growth of
blooms from the flower moon!
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-May-2021
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-Nice image for your poem.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-Effective imagery of the
moon and its light, and
a good concluding line
referring to the growth of
blooms from the flower moon!
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-May-2021
reply by the author on 21-May-2021
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Pam thanks for a great review zanya
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You are very welcome, zanya.
Comment from papa55mike
Yes, we have a flower full moon along with a lunar eclipse. I can't figure out why someone named all the full moons. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 21-May-2021
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Yes, we have a flower full moon along with a lunar eclipse. I can't figure out why someone named all the full moons. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 19-May-2021
reply by the author on 21-May-2021
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Great reveiw - nice to gaze skyward occasionally ! zanya
Comment from Bonnie Seach
The poem follows 4-8-4
format
A fine idea and description
Although these very short free verse poems are easy and quick to write it takes thought and skill to employ the required number of syllables.
Thank you for sharing. All the best
reply by the author on 21-May-2021
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The poem follows 4-8-4
format
A fine idea and description
Although these very short free verse poems are easy and quick to write it takes thought and skill to employ the required number of syllables.
Thank you for sharing. All the best
Comment Written 19-May-2021
reply by the author on 21-May-2021
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Great reveiw zanya
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