Reviews from

I Will Dance and Give God Praise

a contest entry

46 total reviews 
Comment from kahpot
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A beautiful entry and poem, you have made this form look/read easily, very well written with a wonderful message, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 21-May-2021


reply by the author on 21-May-2021
    Thank you for your review, very kind comments, and best wishes.

    Blessings...
Comment from Sally Law
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Such a beautiful offering and praise to God. Let everything that has breath praise the Lord! I hope you win with this, mystery poet. Blessings always, and for the upcoming contest,
Sal XOs...

 Comment Written 20-May-2021


reply by the author on 20-May-2021
    Sally.

    Thanks so much for your very kind comments and best wishes.

    Blessings...
Comment from lyenochka
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You did the CUBE16 form perfectly! And your poem reads like a joyful song and helps us to see spirits dance to give the Lord all the praise He is due!
Best wishes in the contest!!

 Comment Written 20-May-2021


reply by the author on 20-May-2021
    Helen,

    Thanks so much for your very kind comments and best wishes.

    Blessings...
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very beautiful and well written poem you have penned for the Cube 16 Style poem for the contest. You used great descriptive words about dance and praise for our God and lovely imagery. Thank you for sharing. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 20-May-2021


reply by the author on 20-May-2021
    Teri,

    Thanks so much for your very kind comments and best wishes.

    Blessings...
Comment from rspoet
Exceptional
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You've written a beautiful poem for the cube contest
with excellent rhymes and meter,
as well a marvelous uplifting message.
The cube form is very well done.
Best wishes and good luck in the contest.
Robert

 Comment Written 20-May-2021


reply by the author on 20-May-2021
    Robert,

    Thank you for this outstanding review, six-star rating, very kind comments and best wishes; they are greatly appreciated.

    Blessings...
Comment from roof35
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You followed all the rules and wrote an excellent entry for the Cube16 Style contest. Your picture pairs perfectly and your faith comes shining through your words. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 20-May-2021


reply by the author on 20-May-2021
    Thanks so much for this outstanding review, six-star rating, and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.

    Blessings...
Comment from Senyai
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Hello,

I learned what a CUBE16 poem is today! Interesting form that you followed well in your uplifting spiritual verse. 4 syllables in each line, each stanza contains four lines with 16 syllables overall with a rhyme scheme of abcb in each stanza... a lot to follow.

I loved your CUBE16 because even with all these stipulations, you wrote an effortless free flowing work that didn't sound contrived at all. Beautiful art and psalm to accompany as well.

Best wishes,
Senyai

 Comment Written 20-May-2021


reply by the author on 20-May-2021
    Senyai,

    Thanks so much for your very kind comments and best wishes.

    Blessings...
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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Your cube poem is excellent in every respect--skillfully written, according to the guidelines, creative, and deeply spiritual--praising the Lord and expressing security in his power.

 Comment Written 20-May-2021


reply by the author on 20-May-2021
    Janice,
    Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments.

    Blessings...
Comment from Gert sherwood
Exceptional
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Hello unknown writer of your beautiful poem
smiles to the picture of the ballerina and your lovely words using the CUBE16 Style Poem telling us fanstorians ----
what a wonderful feeling you have as you are dancing Our Lord is near.
Gert

 Comment Written 20-May-2021


reply by the author on 20-May-2021
    Gert,

    Thank you for this outstanding review, six-star rating and very kind comments.

    Blessings...
reply by Gert sherwood on 20-May-2021
    You are so welcome.
    Gert
Comment from Rubypond
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This is so lovely! If you are aware of your connection with God spiritually, this will move you! Perfectly metered and I could feel the movement and the joy of worship and praise!

 Comment Written 20-May-2021


reply by the author on 20-May-2021
    Ruby,

    Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments.

    Blessings...