Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

So very beautiful, Portia!
What a splendid Cube poem that articulates your deep faith and love of God.
Congratulations on your well-deserved win!

Thank you for sharing!
diane

 Comment Written 21-May-2021

---

reply by the author on 22-May-2021

Diane,

Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments, and congrats;
Congratulations on your win as well; a beautifully penned poem.

Hugs...Portia

Comment from elchupakabra

Excellent

I don't think the ellipsis you used are appropriate in this circumstance, I would simply remove them. Other than this small note, I thought the piece was well constructed. Good work and thanks for sharing. Later daze.

 Comment Written 21-May-2021

---

reply by the author on 22-May-2021

Thanks so much for your review and kind comments; I appreciate your suggestion regarding the ellipsis.

Blessings...Portia

Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

I send you a virtual six for this beautiful poem. Your faith and the jubilation you feel and express through the talents God has given you...dance and song... are uplifting and very special. Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 21-May-2021

---

reply by the author on 21-May-2021

Thanks so much for your review, virtual six, and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.

Blessings...Portia

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

It is always a pleasure to me to see poetry that praises God. That is why I love the Psalms so much. There has never been a book of poetry that could rival the book of Psalms in beauty and poetic integrity. I have written and published many books of religious poetry. They are really all the same, in that each book contained some poems from an earlier book with new poems added to each new book. This poem is lovely, and I enjoyed it very much. I look forward to reading your next post.

 Comment Written 21-May-2021

---

reply by the author on 22-May-2021

Nomi,

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments. Congratulations on publishing your books; it would be a joy to be able to read them soon. Can they be purchased from Amazon?

Blessings...Portia

reply by nomi338 on 22-May-2021

Yes they can. My latest is titled "Good News from God's word the Bible. By Nolan Miller.

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

This sounds like a good way to use the talent you were given at birth. It gives you and those you watch happiness.
Keep writing and stay healthy
dragonpoet

 Comment Written 21-May-2021

---

reply by the author on 21-May-2021

Your words and kindness are very uplifting. Thanks so much for this outstanding review.

Blessings...Portia

reply by dragonpoet on 22-May-2021

You are most kindly welcome, Portia.
Joan

Comment from gudbjorg

Exceptional

Very nicely done and a beautiful read. The message is delightful and ministers faith and to the reader. The rhyme matches beautifully and is a delight to my soul.

 Comment Written 21-May-2021

---

reply by the author on 21-May-2021

Thanks so much for such an outstanding review, six-star rating, and very kind comments. I am so glad you enjoyed my poem.

Blessings...Portia

Comment from karenina

Excellent

An elegant an eloquent Cube 16...faith glows out of every line... A joy to read as smooth a silk and as comforting as a hug. Your font, your image chosen...all of it combines to bring a sense of peace and serenity.--Karenina

 Comment Written 21-May-2021

---

reply by the author on 21-May-2021

Karenina, (such a beautiful name)

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.

Blessings...Portia

reply by karenina on 21-May-2021

Thanks "pharp"---a very cool pen name, I must say! Love the name Portia as well! My dad's favorite novel was Anna Karenina...hence, my name! Smiles--Karenina

Comment from MissMerri

Exceptional

I am so glad I had a six left for this perfect, and perfectly beautiful song of praise! There is no way to improve on this cube poem. It is exactly right in form and in words, and even the illustration is enough to make my heart sing. I loved it totally and completely, and can't wait to see who wrote it.

MM

 Comment Written 21-May-2021

---

reply by the author on 21-May-2021

MissMerri.

Your comments are very kind and uplifting. Thanks so much for this outstanding review and six-star rating.

Blessings...Portia

Comment from Eunice Amero

Exceptional

A lovely poem. With a merry heart it makes us want to dance. Praise His name and tell others about Him. Thank you for sharing your nice poem. You did a good job. Good luck

 Comment Written 21-May-2021

---

reply by the author on 21-May-2021

Eunice,

Your comments are very kind and uplifting. Thanks so much for this outstanding review and six-star rating; they are greatly appreciated.

Blessings..Portia

reply by Eunice Amero on 22-May-2021

You are very welcome.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

a contest entry
I Will Dance and Give God Praise


Great entry for the CUBE16 Style Poem writing prompt contest. It seems like a difficult form but you did fine. Good flow. The rhyme doesn't seem forced. I like the presentation. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-May-2021

---

reply by the author on 21-May-2021

Gypsy,

Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments and best wishes; they are greatly appreciated.

Blessings...Portia