Comment from T B Botts

Excellent

What a great poem and a reminder that we can praise God in all that we do. I myself couldn't dance if my life depended on it, nor can I sing, but I can still give the Lord thanks and praise in other ways. Thanks so much for sharing. I loved the picture you chose as well. Well done.
Have a blessed evening.

Tom

 Comment Written 22-May-2021

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reply by the author on 23-May-2021

Tom,

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.

Have a great day.

Blessings...Portia

Comment from A. Louise Robertson

Excellent

You have submitted well-written Cube contest submission, but more so, you have captured the joy that you experience in song and dance - The reader can feel that joy in your writing. Thank you for sharing this with us.

 Comment Written 22-May-2021

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reply by the author on 23-May-2021

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.

Have a great day.

Blessings...Portia

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

Congratulations Portia. This is truly a lovely poem and I'm so pleased that you won the contest.

I love the cube form and your well chosen words are a perfect match for it.

Well done.
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 22-May-2021

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reply by the author on 23-May-2021

Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments, and congrats; they are greatly appreciated.

Have a great day.

Blessings...Portia

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very nice artwork
and presentation, Portia,
and congratulations on the win!
-I can see why you did!
-Excellent imagery and rhyme
that begins with the dance
and follows up with
appreciation for God's grace.
-Very well done.

 Comment Written 22-May-2021

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reply by the author on 23-May-2021

Pam,Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments, and congrats; they are greatly appreciated.

Have a great day.

Blessings...Portia

reply by Pam (respa) on 23-May-2021

You are very welcome and deserving of all of it, Portia. You have a great day, too.

Comment from harmony13

Excellent

The author's words are lovely, uplifting and creative. Congratulations
on winning the Contest! I really loved your poem. It flows and connects
well. It conveys joy to the reader. The artwork is perfect and compliments
these words.

 Comment Written 22-May-2021

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reply by the author on 23-May-2021

Harmony,

Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments, and congrats; they are greatly appreciated.

Have a great day.

Blessings...Portia

Comment from jenintorre

Excellent

Spoken like a true dancer. In so very few words you have described my feelings about dance so I can really relate to this poem and enjoyed reading it.

 Comment Written 22-May-2021

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reply by the author on 23-May-2021

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.

Have a great day.

Blessings...Portia

Comment from Leann DS

Excellent

This is a great poem that shows a strong faith in Jesus. I love it! My favorite part is:
With glee, I dance -

I feel His might.

He guides my feet...

My soul in flight.


Congratulations on your contest win. Well deserved!

 Comment Written 22-May-2021

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reply by the author on 23-May-2021

Leann,

Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments, and congrats; they are greatly appreciated.

Have a great day.

Blessings...Portia

Comment from Sharon Davis

Excellent

This Cube 16 poem is excellent. The theme and tone are uplifting and positive. The presentation of the piece is beautiful and the image accompanying the piece exudes the joy that is highlighted through the poem's well chosen words.

 Comment Written 22-May-2021

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reply by the author on 23-May-2021

Sharon,

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.

Have a great day.

Blessings...Portia

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

Congratulations on your win in this contest. There is so much joy expressed in dance and the rhythm of your poem captures the essence of that. I have always been fond of The Dubliners song, Lord of the Dance - the one that has a chorus:
Dance, then, wherever you may be,
I am the Lord of the Dance, said he,
And I'll lead you all, wherever you may be,
And I'll lead you all in the Dance, said he

 Comment Written 22-May-2021

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reply by the author on 22-May-2021

Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments, and congrats. I went to u-tube and listened to "I am the Lord of the Dance."
It is a beautiful song indeed; it was such a blessing this morning. Thanks so much for sharing.

Have a wonderful and blessed day.

Portia

Comment from Sanku

Excellent

You have adhered to the rules of this form "cube 16'. This is the first time I am coming across this form.
Music and dance are a form of worship in most religion. Your read very well and the form is well suited to the theme.

 Comment Written 22-May-2021

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reply by the author on 22-May-2021

Thanks so mcuh for your review and comments.

Have a great day.

Blessings...Portia