One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, This is a very nice and well written haiku you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and lovely imagery from the art work you chose. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 18-May-2021
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Gypsy, This is a very nice and well written haiku you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and lovely imagery from the art work you chose. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 18-May-2021
reply by the author on 18-May-2021
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Thank you very much for your exceptional review, six stars, and kind words... Teri.
Gypsy
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This haiku is wonderful, with a plethora of alliterative "b" sounds galore! You've done an excellent job of making this poem irresistible to read aloud, what with its musical 'lyrics' to a tune, the reader can hear in their head as they read aloud this piece.
Thank you for sharing...you certainly know your haikus and their applications.
Have a lovely rest of your week,
Jesse
reply by the author on 18-May-2021
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This haiku is wonderful, with a plethora of alliterative "b" sounds galore! You've done an excellent job of making this poem irresistible to read aloud, what with its musical 'lyrics' to a tune, the reader can hear in their head as they read aloud this piece.
Thank you for sharing...you certainly know your haikus and their applications.
Have a lovely rest of your week,
Jesse
Comment Written 18-May-2021
reply by the author on 18-May-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words... Jesse.
Gypsy
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You are welcome, Gypsy. Did I do something to offend you in some way? I notice no more Gypsy hugs are offered. I kind of miss that from you.
Have a wonderful day,
Jesse
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Oh, no, not at all. I have colitis from eating sushi. I am in a lot of pain. You are always kind to me and I appreciate it.
***Extra gypsy hugs****
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I'm so sorry, Gypsy...I hope it is temporary?!
It feels nice to have Gypsy hugs again!
Take it easy,
Jesse
Comment from kahpot
Love the connection of Flower moon balances as the boughs bounce in the breeze, you have given the name of this moon a life in the trees, brought reflections to reality, vey well presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 18-May-2021
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Love the connection of Flower moon balances as the boughs bounce in the breeze, you have given the name of this moon a life in the trees, brought reflections to reality, vey well presented****kahpot
Comment Written 18-May-2021
reply by the author on 18-May-2021
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In classic haiku we don't use alliteration, but this is a contemporary haiku.
Thank you very much for your exceptional review, six stars, and kind words... Kym.
Gypsy
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Gypsy,
This is an excellent poem of Haiku that you write. The image is beautiful, and it complements your poem nicely. I like the phrase flower moon, and the images your poem conveys.
Thank you for introducing the reader to this unusual, eloquent type of Haiku.
ð??? Cindy
reply by the author on 18-May-2021
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Gypsy,
This is an excellent poem of Haiku that you write. The image is beautiful, and it complements your poem nicely. I like the phrase flower moon, and the images your poem conveys.
Thank you for introducing the reader to this unusual, eloquent type of Haiku.
ð??? Cindy
Comment Written 18-May-2021
reply by the author on 18-May-2021
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In classic haiku we don't use alliteration, but this is a contemporary haiku.
Thank you very much for your review and kind words... Cindy.
Gypsy
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You?re welcome, Gypsy. Also for now I am unable to complete the haiku class. I?m sorry. I will try again, though in the future if that?s alright.😊
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Sure, you can join us for any of our events
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Thank you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The moon and blossoms here in harmony with each other as the juggle their place in this scene, you brought it to life with your few words, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-May-2021
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The moon and blossoms here in harmony with each other as the juggle their place in this scene, you brought it to life with your few words, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-May-2021
reply by the author on 18-May-2021
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In classic haiku we don't use alliteration, but this is a contemporary haiku.
Thank you very much for your review and kind words... Dolly.
Gypsy
Comment from Ginnygray
Lovely poem describing the moon as a flower resting on the baugh of cherry blossoms. The baughs seem to dance as they bounce. Great job on describing beauty.
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reply by the author on 18-May-2021
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Lovely poem describing the moon as a flower resting on the baugh of cherry blossoms. The baughs seem to dance as they bounce. Great job on describing beauty.
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Comment Written 18-May-2021
reply by the author on 18-May-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words... ginny.
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
Loved this beautiful poem and picture. Thanks for reminding me that May's full moon is the flower moon. I like the B-alliteration and in reading the words, I almost sense a feeling of a bouncing ball.
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reply by the author on 18-May-2021
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Loved this beautiful poem and picture. Thanks for reminding me that May's full moon is the flower moon. I like the B-alliteration and in reading the words, I almost sense a feeling of a bouncing ball.
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Comment Written 17-May-2021
reply by the author on 18-May-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words... Helen.
Gypsy hugs
Gypsy
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How are you feeling today, Gypsy? 💖
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I can't remember if I told you, I went to ER and the good news I didn't break any bones. Bad news, they found out I have colitis...an infection in my colon. It's very painful.
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Oh, the colitis - probably got worse with the stress of the accident. Yes, you told me about the ER and I've been praying! Thanking the Lord for answering. Now we have to pray for His healing the colitis! 💖🙏
