Dreams of Hope
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Comment from mobileliz
I love the picture and you have three great thoughts. For me at least, they don't blend as well as they could. Considering the 5-7-5 format, I understand. I have no doubt that in Free Verse your msg would have been presented better. Keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 18-May-2021
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I love the picture and you have three great thoughts. For me at least, they don't blend as well as they could. Considering the 5-7-5 format, I understand. I have no doubt that in Free Verse your msg would have been presented better. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 18-May-2021
reply by the author on 18-May-2021
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Thank you!
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you're welcome
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love the positivity in your words here and a good attitude always helps to pave the way for a better life with good things happening, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-May-2021
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I love the positivity in your words here and a good attitude always helps to pave the way for a better life with good things happening, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-May-2021
reply by the author on 18-May-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Dilettante junior
Hi Raul,
I like where you took this 5-7-5 hope short poem. You painted an uplifting picture of faith, hope and miracles. For the last verse, I would suggest 'leap of faith' instead of chance.
All the best with this one.
Cheers,
DJ
reply by the author on 18-May-2021
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Hi Raul,
I like where you took this 5-7-5 hope short poem. You painted an uplifting picture of faith, hope and miracles. For the last verse, I would suggest 'leap of faith' instead of chance.
All the best with this one.
Cheers,
DJ
Comment Written 18-May-2021
reply by the author on 18-May-2021
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Thank you!
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I did what you suggested. Thank you for your help!
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Yay! Looks even better now! All the best :)