Reviews from

flicker of hope

a 5 7 5 poem

2 total reviews 
Comment from Bonnie Seach
Excellent
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Neatly fits contest rules. Colorful presentation and imagery. The "flicker of hope ignites into faith". Meaningful words. Thank you for sharing.
Best wishes

 Comment Written 17-May-2021


reply by the author on 18-May-2021
    Thanks for the insightful review. I do try to keep hope alive these days. Sometimes it's hard, but I know things will get better.
    Have a great day, j
reply by Bonnie Seach on 18-May-2021
    If it will help, God promises to give us hope. Jeremiah 29:11,12
    Best wishes
reply by the author on 18-May-2021
    I have been thinking about your previous review where you say that we are all responsible for our own salvation, so true and I am working on building myself up and owning my circumstances, so thanks for that, cheers, j
reply by Bonnie Seach on 19-May-2021
    Admirable! Like yourself, I am deeply interested in the matter of salvation. I like to discuss it with spiritually minded individuals. I am open and available for this sort of interchange. Kindest wishes to you
Comment from Bill Schott
Excellent
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This 5-7-5, Flicker of Hope, has the right set up and suggests that even the embers of a dying desire can be brought again to burn brightly with anticipation and faith. Nice.

 Comment Written 17-May-2021


reply by the author on 18-May-2021
    Thanks for the insightful review. Yes, I keep hope glowing and know that better days are ahead. Cheers, j