flicker of hope
a 5 7 5 poem2 total reviews
Comment from Bonnie Seach
Neatly fits contest rules. Colorful presentation and imagery. The "flicker of hope ignites into faith". Meaningful words. Thank you for sharing.
Best wishes
reply by the author on 18-May-2021
Neatly fits contest rules. Colorful presentation and imagery. The "flicker of hope ignites into faith". Meaningful words. Thank you for sharing.
Best wishes
Comment Written 17-May-2021
reply by the author on 18-May-2021
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Thanks for the insightful review. I do try to keep hope alive these days. Sometimes it's hard, but I know things will get better.
Have a great day, j
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If it will help, God promises to give us hope. Jeremiah 29:11,12
Best wishes
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I have been thinking about your previous review where you say that we are all responsible for our own salvation, so true and I am working on building myself up and owning my circumstances, so thanks for that, cheers, j
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Admirable! Like yourself, I am deeply interested in the matter of salvation. I like to discuss it with spiritually minded individuals. I am open and available for this sort of interchange. Kindest wishes to you
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Flicker of Hope, has the right set up and suggests that even the embers of a dying desire can be brought again to burn brightly with anticipation and faith. Nice.
reply by the author on 18-May-2021
This 5-7-5, Flicker of Hope, has the right set up and suggests that even the embers of a dying desire can be brought again to burn brightly with anticipation and faith. Nice.
Comment Written 17-May-2021
reply by the author on 18-May-2021
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Thanks for the insightful review. Yes, I keep hope glowing and know that better days are ahead. Cheers, j