Reflections of a dying breed
The future is not written in stone.36 total reviews
Comment from Denie R
This is great Jesse. To me you are describing our walk through life. And it seems to me you are describing America at the moment. Well done my friend. There are so many great lines to ponder, and to meditate on.
reply by the author on 23-May-2021
  |
This is great Jesse. To me you are describing our walk through life. And it seems to me you are describing America at the moment. Well done my friend. There are so many great lines to ponder, and to meditate on.
Comment Written 23-May-2021
reply by the author on 23-May-2021
-
Thanks, my friend, for the exceptional review and rating! What a surprise to see your name and receive the sixth star from you as well! I like your comments...they can certainly, be seen that way it is, true.
I have read a lot of different perspectives on this prose piece and, that makes me glad! Thanks for your kind words...I appreciate them very much! It is great to hear from you, and you know that I value your opinion highly!
Have a good rest of your weekend,
Jesse
Comment from dragonpoet
This seems to be a very metaphoric look at retirement. I like death as shooting at stars. Which also could be dreaming of what the righteous thing to do is with your extra time.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 22-May-2021
 |
This seems to be a very metaphoric look at retirement. I like death as shooting at stars. Which also could be dreaming of what the righteous thing to do is with your extra time.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 22-May-2021
reply by the author on 22-May-2021
-
Thank you, Joan, for your unique perspective. Actually, I haven't retired since I am on Disability--SSI so, I am not able to retire, Social Security decides, for me. Thanks for the creative idea, anyway!
I am not sure if others see it that way but, it is a viable way to look at it. Thanks for your encouraging comments and excellent rating. I will endeavor to stay healthy in a positive beneficial way! I assure you of this!
Have a beautiful weekend, my friend,
Jesse
-
You're welcome, Jesse. i am glad I found a different, but, accecptable meaning to your poem.
Enjoy your weekend, too.
Joan
Comment from BethShelby
I do agree with what you say. As we age it is easy to lose that feeling of wanting to get out and conquer the world, but there are others at the same place we once were, anxious and ready to take the place of those who have lost the enthusiasm. I believe we should never be too quick to say it is time to retire to the pasture. We should try to regain that passion and keep ourselves part of the scene as long as possible.
reply by the author on 20-May-2021
|
I do agree with what you say. As we age it is easy to lose that feeling of wanting to get out and conquer the world, but there are others at the same place we once were, anxious and ready to take the place of those who have lost the enthusiasm. I believe we should never be too quick to say it is time to retire to the pasture. We should try to regain that passion and keep ourselves part of the scene as long as possible.
Comment Written 20-May-2021
reply by the author on 20-May-2021
-
I agree with you, Beth, wholeheartedly! Your comments are right on the money, and I am only one of us to say what you have said so beautifully in this review.
Thanks for the excellent review and rating!
Have a great day,
Jesse
Comment from 4theloveoftrees
I enjoyed the creativity in this piece. I particularly enjoyed the last line, "You can taste defeat but, know that your heart is still aflame with desire, to do something righteous, noble, and profound with your life." This is so true, it's never too late, no matter the topic. I read this a few times to really absorb, well done. I have a six to spare so it's yours my friend!
reply by the author on 20-May-2021
|
I enjoyed the creativity in this piece. I particularly enjoyed the last line, "You can taste defeat but, know that your heart is still aflame with desire, to do something righteous, noble, and profound with your life." This is so true, it's never too late, no matter the topic. I read this a few times to really absorb, well done. I have a six to spare so it's yours my friend!
Comment Written 20-May-2021
reply by the author on 20-May-2021
-
Thanks, Patricia, for this wonderful gift of an extra star because you enjoyed this prose piece! It sounds like you can relate as well. I am glad you read this several times to absorb the nuances. And I appreciate you choosing your favorite line of this. Thank you for your kind words and the awesome review and exceptional rating!
Have a terrific Thursday!
Jesse
Comment from Robbie Hutchins
Yes, relatable are the hands chasing each other around the dial of time. Wonderfully worded. We never know when the hands on the clock are gonna stop? Hope I bought some Energizers, they keep going and going. Enjoyed it, relatable for me.
reply by the author on 20-May-2021
|
Yes, relatable are the hands chasing each other around the dial of time. Wonderfully worded. We never know when the hands on the clock are gonna stop? Hope I bought some Energizers, they keep going and going. Enjoyed it, relatable for me.
Comment Written 20-May-2021
reply by the author on 20-May-2021
-
Thank you so much for this exceptional rating and review. It was a wonderful surprise to find a six star review on my screen this morning! I am glad that this piece resonated with you. I am also happy that you enjoyed it as well.
Have a super day!
Jesse
Comment from C. F. Rogers
This, though short, is to the point and chalked full of beauty and grace. We aren't given much time on this earth, so we need to take things as they are given to us no matter the circumstances or outcomes. Everything is a cycle and we all play a part. Thank you so much for sharing such a gorgeous piece!
reply by the author on 19-May-2021
|
This, though short, is to the point and chalked full of beauty and grace. We aren't given much time on this earth, so we need to take things as they are given to us no matter the circumstances or outcomes. Everything is a cycle and we all play a part. Thank you so much for sharing such a gorgeous piece!
Comment Written 19-May-2021
reply by the author on 19-May-2021
-
Thank you for this insightful review and kind comments. I like your take on my prose piece and agree with you wholeheartedly.
Have a great evening,
Jesse
Comment from judiverse
I really liked your great thoughts and expression in this. Your words are so encouraging. We shouldn't ever give up, even though we'll be replaced by the younger generations. Despite their age, people still want to accomplish something meaningful, and your words are certainly encouragement for them to do just that. Excellent work. judi
reply by the author on 19-May-2021
|
I really liked your great thoughts and expression in this. Your words are so encouraging. We shouldn't ever give up, even though we'll be replaced by the younger generations. Despite their age, people still want to accomplish something meaningful, and your words are certainly encouragement for them to do just that. Excellent work. judi
Comment Written 19-May-2021
reply by the author on 19-May-2021
-
Thank you, Judi, for your insightful and thought-provoking comments. I hope I have succeeded in encouraging, not only the older generations but, the younger ones, as well. Thank you for your kind words and excellent rating too.
Have a lovely evening,
Jesse
-
You're very welcome. I enjoyed your poem. judi
Comment from amahra
Wow, I'm not sure what to make of the message of this writing; it appears to smack of gloom and doom with little sprinkles of hope thrown in here and there. But I respect your opinion.
reply by the author on 19-May-2021
|
Wow, I'm not sure what to make of the message of this writing; it appears to smack of gloom and doom with little sprinkles of hope thrown in here and there. But I respect your opinion.
Comment Written 19-May-2021
reply by the author on 19-May-2021
-
Thank you for your respect. I appreciate you taking the time and effort to read and review my work. Thank you for the excellent rating.
Have a nice night,
Jesse
Comment from estory
Its a philosophy of perseverance, that you speak of here. This drive to struggle through the adversity, to hang on in the face of struggle and difficulties. I think there's a great personal tone here that really makes it feel straight from the heart, off the cuff. estory
reply by the author on 19-May-2021
|
Its a philosophy of perseverance, that you speak of here. This drive to struggle through the adversity, to hang on in the face of struggle and difficulties. I think there's a great personal tone here that really makes it feel straight from the heart, off the cuff. estory
Comment Written 19-May-2021
reply by the author on 19-May-2021
-
Yes. You've nailed it on what I was trying to accomplish with this post. Thank you for your pertinent analysis and excellent review and rating. Your review means a lot to me.
Have a good evening,
Jesse
Comment from William Stephenson1
So many live as if the last chapter has already been written. This fatalism shortens our life span. I counsel too many people who have given up on themselves and others. But to have hope is to have purpose, to have meaning.
I applaud your attitude. Even those who are "wounded" can find purpose.
I want to read more of your work.
Bill Stephenson
reply by the author on 19-May-2021
|
So many live as if the last chapter has already been written. This fatalism shortens our life span. I counsel too many people who have given up on themselves and others. But to have hope is to have purpose, to have meaning.
I applaud your attitude. Even those who are "wounded" can find purpose.
I want to read more of your work.
Bill Stephenson
Comment Written 19-May-2021
reply by the author on 19-May-2021
-
Thank you so much, Bill, for your wonderful comments on the work you do to help those who have given up on themselves.
I cheer you on in your fight against fatalism!
I appreciate your kind words, and have, and will never give up, on hope for doing something meaningful with my life!
Thank you for the super review and excellent rating!
Have a good day,
Jesse
