Down to the Last Dollar
A script about a couple getting to know one another.2 total reviews
Comment from lancellot
This is both well written and very sweet. i like how the couple have complete honesty and trust, to the level where they can just have fun like two little kids. No pretenses, no borders, just be themselves. No large amount of money needed, just each other.
Great work.
reply by the author on 14-May-2021
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This is both well written and very sweet. i like how the couple have complete honesty and trust, to the level where they can just have fun like two little kids. No pretenses, no borders, just be themselves. No large amount of money needed, just each other.
Great work.
Comment Written 14-May-2021
reply by the author on 14-May-2021
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Hi lancellot! Thank you for your feedback and comments. I appreciate that you took the time to read my script. I was trying for sweet and mature simultaneously, so I'm glad I accomplished that goal. Thank you for the excellent rating. Have a blessed weekend.
Comment from judiverse
This is a sweet story, and your script is in excellent format. I liked the items that Jenna and Benjamin chose. This sounds like a fun contest. They show that gifts don't need to be expensive to be meaningful. I don't often frequent dollar stores but went to one a few days before Christmas and was amazed at all the holiday supplies they had. I like the lights in the shape of Solo cups. They did well with their money. Good luck in the contest. judi
reply by the author on 14-May-2021
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This is a sweet story, and your script is in excellent format. I liked the items that Jenna and Benjamin chose. This sounds like a fun contest. They show that gifts don't need to be expensive to be meaningful. I don't often frequent dollar stores but went to one a few days before Christmas and was amazed at all the holiday supplies they had. I like the lights in the shape of Solo cups. They did well with their money. Good luck in the contest. judi
Comment Written 14-May-2021
reply by the author on 14-May-2021
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Hi judiverse! Thank for the feedback and comments. I appreciate that you took the time to read my script. I was trying for sweet, so I'm glad I accomplished that goal. I did have fun writing the script. Thank for the excellent rating and the well wishes. Have blessed weekend.
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You're welcome. I hope you'll write several scripts. This one read smoothly. It is surprising what you can find at the dollar stores. I'll have to keep that in mind for next year. judi
