Politically Correct
75 Word Story contest entry22 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Haha, so true. However, I wonder if homo sapiens are allowed to use the word 'people, native, among the many no no's now. Using the word 'cow' designates female and native is derogatory, so maybe next time Timmy will use homo sapiens / land of Americans instead of cowpeople / native Americans. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
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reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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Haha, so true. However, I wonder if homo sapiens are allowed to use the word 'people, native, among the many no no's now. Using the word 'cow' designates female and native is derogatory, so maybe next time Timmy will use homo sapiens / land of Americans instead of cowpeople / native Americans. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
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Comment Written 17-May-2021
reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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Hahaha. That never even crossed my mind. Lol. Thank you for the great review and strong worldly points, Jan. Too funny. I really appreciate the stars, J. Thank you again.
Ron
Comment from Erika Seshadri
This is great. Cowpeople, lol. I feel like this is a strong entry for the contest and hope it does well.
BTW, Native should also be capitalized because it's part of the title of a specific group of people.
Have a great week.
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reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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This is great. Cowpeople, lol. I feel like this is a strong entry for the contest and hope it does well.
BTW, Native should also be capitalized because it's part of the title of a specific group of people.
Have a great week.
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Comment Written 17-May-2021
reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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Thank you for the great review and for pointing out the goof, Erika. I wasn't sure about that. I fixed it. I'm glad you liked my silly little story. I hope you have a great week as well.
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Ron
