Politically Correct
75 Word Story contest entry22 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
Please say it ain't so! what has our world come to... are that afraid of being normal...being relaxed and ourselves... that we would change simple things that never had any bad meanings to them until adults got in the game. It'll always be cowboys and Indians... Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 19-May-2021
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Please say it ain't so! what has our world come to... are that afraid of being normal...being relaxed and ourselves... that we would change simple things that never had any bad meanings to them until adults got in the game. It'll always be cowboys and Indians... Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 17-May-2021
reply by the author on 19-May-2021
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Thank you. Yes, it will always be cowboys and Indians. It's ridiculous some of the stuff they're coming up with nowadays. All I can do is chuckle at it. Thank you for the great review and gracious stars, Carol. I'm glad you liked this silly little piece. Have yourself a wonderful day.
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Ron
Comment from Wendy G
Oh no - has it really come to this?! Ninety nine percent of people are offended by the stupidity of this political correctness. You told the story very well, and with an admirable photo to accompany. Best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 19-May-2021
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Oh no - has it really come to this?! Ninety nine percent of people are offended by the stupidity of this political correctness. You told the story very well, and with an admirable photo to accompany. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 17-May-2021
reply by the author on 19-May-2021
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Lol. Yes, all this has gone way beyond ridiculous to me. I actually created this picture from 3 different Google Images. I love playing with my art program nearly as much as writing. I really appreciate the great review and stars, Wendy. I'm glad you liked my silly little story.
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Ron
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, this is unfortunately how things seem to be turning out these days and it sounds so ridiculous! You made me smile here, a fun post, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-May-2021
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Ha ha ha, this is unfortunately how things seem to be turning out these days and it sounds so ridiculous! You made me smile here, a fun post, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-May-2021
reply by the author on 19-May-2021
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Dolly. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness. Have yourself a fantastic day.
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Ron
Comment from L. Kalere
Out of the mouth of babes ... It just doesn't sound like the same old games, but back then it was all about shooting people (so unPC now, and probably for the better anyway). Great entry for the Flash Fiction. Best of luck.
Linda
reply by the author on 19-May-2021
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Out of the mouth of babes ... It just doesn't sound like the same old games, but back then it was all about shooting people (so unPC now, and probably for the better anyway). Great entry for the Flash Fiction. Best of luck.
Linda
Comment Written 17-May-2021
reply by the author on 19-May-2021
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Linda. Yes, times sure have change from back then, that's for sure. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silly little piece.
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Ron
Comment from Jesse James Doty
That's pretty amusing, my friend. You got the point across in just 75 words, bravo! Being PC is becoming quite a big topic of conversation these days, and yet, I can remember when folks said and did what they pleased and, sometimes, it was ugly. Words are powerful tools of oppression and can be used to keep people down. So, there is a point in asking folks to say something a certain way. It may be just semantics but sometimes words hurt. Anyway, that is my two cents worth of opinion...do with it what you may. Still, you make a good point and, the pendulum has swung a little too far in one direction as it sometimes does. So, there are always two sides to the story.
Thank you for sharing and for letting me share as well.
Have a good day,
Jesse
reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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That's pretty amusing, my friend. You got the point across in just 75 words, bravo! Being PC is becoming quite a big topic of conversation these days, and yet, I can remember when folks said and did what they pleased and, sometimes, it was ugly. Words are powerful tools of oppression and can be used to keep people down. So, there is a point in asking folks to say something a certain way. It may be just semantics but sometimes words hurt. Anyway, that is my two cents worth of opinion...do with it what you may. Still, you make a good point and, the pendulum has swung a little too far in one direction as it sometimes does. So, there are always two sides to the story.
Thank you for sharing and for letting me share as well.
Have a good day,
Jesse
Comment Written 17-May-2021
reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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Hey, Jesse, hello. Thank you for the great review, friend. Yes, it hasn't been that long ago when people said just whatever they wanted, no matter who they insulted or hurt others. I really appreciate the generous stars, J. I'm glad you liked my silly little story. I hope you have a great new week. Thank you again.
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Ron
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Hello Ron, it has been a while since we've chatted like this. It is nice to see you posting something again. I am glad you get my point and all.
You are very welcome for the review and, I hope you have a good week too!
Jesse
Comment from LyndaS
DS,
OMG, how true is this scenario? This is the CRT (critical race theory) crap they want to teach our kids in school. I think you have demonstrated well how they are sucking the magic out of even make-believe for our children.
You did fine job with the 75 words you were restricted to. Love the pic! What a cutie! Good luck with the powers that be on this. Well done. Lynda
reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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DS,
OMG, how true is this scenario? This is the CRT (critical race theory) crap they want to teach our kids in school. I think you have demonstrated well how they are sucking the magic out of even make-believe for our children.
You did fine job with the 75 words you were restricted to. Love the pic! What a cutie! Good luck with the powers that be on this. Well done. Lynda
Comment Written 17-May-2021
reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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Wow, thank you so much for the fantastic review and giant sixer, Lynda. Oh, yeah, I wasn't even thinking about the CRT when writing this but you are right. The picture is actually 3 different pics I mixed together with my art program. The background, the boy and the gun are all different pictures. Yep, they're even trying to diminish the imagination our children can have. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars, Lynda. I'm glad you liked this little piece. Thank you again.
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Ron
Comment from robyn corum
DS,
hahahahaha Do we all hear how ludicrous that sounds? Of course, I'm sure the PC Police would say that it's an inappropriate game anyway. Oh, well. You know, can we ever get our innocence back?
Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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DS,
hahahahaha Do we all hear how ludicrous that sounds? Of course, I'm sure the PC Police would say that it's an inappropriate game anyway. Oh, well. You know, can we ever get our innocence back?
Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 17-May-2021
reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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Lol. I doubt it. Thank you for the awesome review, Robyn. I really appreciate the gracious stars. At least a couple people are getting a laugh out of this silliness. I'm glad you're one of them. Thank you again.
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Ron
Comment from Pantygynt
Humpwhistle, who writes stories about cow people and native Americans told me recently that you can say 'Cowboys and Injuns' when writing obout or within the context of the genre. I felt that was good to know so Billy wood have been perfectly politically correct to invite his friend to a game of C and I but he must not refer to the NA who moved in next door as I unless of course they are engaged in the game too. It is all so complicated, Billy. The best thing you can do is dress as Darth Vader and go play Starwars.
reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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Humpwhistle, who writes stories about cow people and native Americans told me recently that you can say 'Cowboys and Injuns' when writing obout or within the context of the genre. I felt that was good to know so Billy wood have been perfectly politically correct to invite his friend to a game of C and I but he must not refer to the NA who moved in next door as I unless of course they are engaged in the game too. It is all so complicated, Billy. The best thing you can do is dress as Darth Vader and go play Starwars.
Comment Written 17-May-2021
reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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Hahaha. Yep, that would take care of it. I would hope the kids can still say C+I. I was just being overly ridiculous with it. Lol. Thank you for the great review, Pantygynt. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I hope everything is good in your corner of the world. Have a great new week.
Ron
Comment from lancellot
Well, I guess Billy has leaned its best to be politically correct even with your friends. But I think that game as is would be offensive to some people. Very good post. It is humor but may be more true than fiction.
reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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Well, I guess Billy has leaned its best to be politically correct even with your friends. But I think that game as is would be offensive to some people. Very good post. It is humor but may be more true than fiction.
Comment Written 17-May-2021
reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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Thank you for the great review, Lancellot. Yes, that's what's scary. I really appreciate the generous stars. Have yourself a great new week.
Ron
Comment from Bonnie Seach
From the sublime to the ridiculous. World affairs drift on the waves of the ocean like flotsam and jetsum. Youngsters understand political ploys better than older generations who didn't rely on smart phones and social media to do their thinking for them. Thank you sharing your well written story and message. Best wishes
reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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From the sublime to the ridiculous. World affairs drift on the waves of the ocean like flotsam and jetsum. Youngsters understand political ploys better than older generations who didn't rely on smart phones and social media to do their thinking for them. Thank you sharing your well written story and message. Best wishes
Comment Written 17-May-2021
reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Bonnie. Yes, we have way too may avenues doing our thinking for us, that's for sure. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked this little piece. Have a great day.
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Ron
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I did enjoy it. Thanks again.
All the best
