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Politically Correct

75 Word Story contest entry

22 total reviews 
Comment from Chrissy710
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Ha Ha Ron This made me laugh and yes what or where are we going with all this PC rot
I write a PC poem 5 years ago (Politically Incorrect) one of my first poem ever posted on FS and my views haven' t changed in fact they have strengthened
Your poem is funny and just shows how silly society has become
Congrats on your win
I would have voted for this too
Cheers Christine

 Comment Written 27-May-2021


reply by the author on 28-May-2021
    Hey, Christine, hi. Thank you so much for the awesome review. Yes, it seems the world's gone crazy. Lol. I really appreciate the gracious stars and congrats, C. I'm glad you liked this silly little tale. I hope you have a wonderful weekend.

    =]

    Ron
Comment from DeboraDyess
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YOu certainly deserved the win! I enjoyed this very much. My hubby is half Commanche, so he says HE can still say 'Indian'. I, however, have to say 'Native American'. He's such a nut!
The story was perfect.
Blessings,
Deb

 Comment Written 27-May-2021


reply by the author on 27-May-2021
    Thank you for the fantastic review, Deb. I really appreciate the generous stars. Yeah, that's funny how that works like that. Haha. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Thank you again.

    =]

    Ron
Comment from Wils
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This makes me feel very sorry for future generations. Political correctness is taking childhood out out being a child. Congratulations on the win.
Geoff

 Comment Written 25-May-2021


reply by the author on 25-May-2021
    Thank you for the great review and congrats, Geoff. Yes, it's a sad state of affairs, that's for sure.

    Ron
Comment from dragonpoet
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This shows us that children do listen to what adults say and sometimes take it too much to heart. This is both funny and sad. It shows how much 'political correctness' takes the fun out of life.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Congrats on the well deserved contest win.
Joan

 Comment Written 25-May-2021


reply by the author on 25-May-2021
    Thank you for the fantastic review, Joan. Yes, this is both sad and humorous. I really appreciate the gracious stars and congrats. I'm glad you liked my little story.

    Ron
reply by dragonpoet on 25-May-2021
    You?re welcome, Ron.
    Joan
Comment from lyenochka
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That's funny. I guess it doesn't bother Billy none. He adapted his vocabulary and I'm sure his version of Cow people and Native Americans will play out differently than the old TV shows.
Congratulations on the win!!

 Comment Written 25-May-2021


reply by the author on 25-May-2021
    Lol. I'm sure it will. Thank you for the great review and congrats, Lyenochka. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.

    Ron
Comment from Contests

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A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry.

 Comment Written 25-May-2021


reply by the author on 25-May-2021
    Thank you, FS. I'm glad you like this silly entry.

    Ron
Comment from Justin Chopin
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Great observations Dragon. PC culture is just so boring and I'm glad that you were able to show how stupid it can be in your piece. Thought the last line about cowpokes and native americans was very funny since it shows how soft our culture has gotten. Great work.

 Comment Written 19-May-2021


reply by the author on 21-May-2021
    Thank you for the great review, Justin. Yeah, it's gotten flat out ridiculous anymore. Lol. I really appreciate the generous generous stars, friend. Have yourself a great weekend.

    Ron
reply by Justin Chopin on 21-May-2021
    You're welcome.
Comment from BethShelby
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This is funny. It seems Billy wants to be politically correct. Personally I don't care about politically correctness, not does my friends, but I find on this site I'm often corrected about the way I express myself in writing.

 Comment Written 18-May-2021


reply by the author on 19-May-2021
    Yes, some folks on here think their poop doesn't stink. Lol. I just blow it off. There's way too much PC going on nowadays. Thank you for the fantastic review and the generous stars, Beth. I'm glad you liked this silly little piece.
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Good image for your story, Ron.
-I enjoyed reading it.
-A good introduction, and
I can picture Billy listening
somewhere but not necessarily
being seen!
-He took the discussion to heart.
-Great ending!
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-May-2021


reply by the author on 19-May-2021
    Thank you for the great review, Pam. I really appreciate the gracious stars and good luck wishes. Yes, we better teach them right while they're young. Lol. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Thank you again.

    =]

    Ron
reply by Pam (respa) on 19-May-2021
    You are very welcome, Ron. I appreciate your reply, and I enjoyed this story.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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You nailed it. Funny, the other day I posted about the ridiculous mandate re pregnant "people." This is a brilliant flash--humorous take on a serious subject.

 Comment Written 17-May-2021


reply by the author on 19-May-2021
    Pregnant people. Hahahahaha. That's a riot. Thank you for the great review and chuckle, Elizabeth. I'm glad you liked this silliness. Have yourself an awesome day.

    =]

    Ron