Twilight Time
Peaceful end to the day.5 total reviews
Comment from karenina
Voting is begun. I read every entry. Many good efforts. Yours called out to me...
I hope you win, mystery author. I placed my vote in it!
Smile....
Karenina
reply by the author on 15-May-2021
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Voting is begun. I read every entry. Many good efforts. Yours called out to me...
I hope you win, mystery author. I placed my vote in it!
Smile....
Karenina
Comment Written 15-May-2021
reply by the author on 15-May-2021
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Thank you for your read and encouraging words.
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Awesome! Got my vote!--Karenina
Comment from Bonnie Seach
Sun bows it's blond head. And that is evident in the artwork with this poem. Well coordinated. Well written and contest ready. Nature is a source, a catalogue from which to choose photos and words for poetry. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes
reply by the author on 14-May-2021
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Sun bows it's blond head. And that is evident in the artwork with this poem. Well coordinated. Well written and contest ready. Nature is a source, a catalogue from which to choose photos and words for poetry. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes
Comment Written 14-May-2021
reply by the author on 14-May-2021
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Thank you for your read and your encouraging comments.
Comment from mobileliz
cloud and billow paint a soft image of floating, blushes implies soft innocence, bows implies quiet and respectful, all nice images and the picture is the icing on the cake, nice job
reply by the author on 14-May-2021
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cloud and billow paint a soft image of floating, blushes implies soft innocence, bows implies quiet and respectful, all nice images and the picture is the icing on the cake, nice job
Comment Written 14-May-2021
reply by the author on 14-May-2021
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Thank you for your read and kind, encouraging words.
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you're welcome
Comment from tfawcus
This is a good ekphrastic five-seven-five, which summarises the picture perfectly and gives the reader a good impression of its effect on the author. A very calming scene.
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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This is a good ekphrastic five-seven-five, which summarises the picture perfectly and gives the reader a good impression of its effect on the author. A very calming scene.
Comment Written 13-May-2021
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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Thank you for your read and feedback. Much appreciated.
Comment from RodG
What a magnificent picture chosen to illustrate your poem.
Good use of colors to show how the evening sky morphs at twilight.
I like your personification of the sun bowing his "blond head."
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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What a magnificent picture chosen to illustrate your poem.
Good use of colors to show how the evening sky morphs at twilight.
I like your personification of the sun bowing his "blond head."
Comment Written 13-May-2021
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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Thank you for your read and feedback. Much appreciated.