Luminous Horizon
What the eyes behold when the sun sets11 total reviews
Comment from Charlotte Morse
Congratulations on winning this competition Nancy!
Your poem was definitely deserving of this honour, it's lovely. Is the image one of yours too? It's beautiful and sets your 5-7-5 off so well.
Charlotte
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2022
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Congratulations on winning this competition Nancy!
Your poem was definitely deserving of this honour, it's lovely. Is the image one of yours too? It's beautiful and sets your 5-7-5 off so well.
Charlotte
Comment Written 21-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2022
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Hi Charlotte, Thank you so much for the lovely review! I'm thrilled you enjoyed my 5-7-5 poem. Thanks for the congratulations note...and yes the image is mine. It's a picture of a sunset in the White Mts. of New Hampshire USA. : o) Nancy
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Luminous Horizon, has the right formatting and brings the beautiful mountain ranges and night sky into the reader's consciousness. Nice.
reply by the author on 15-May-2021
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This 5-7-5, Luminous Horizon, has the right formatting and brings the beautiful mountain ranges and night sky into the reader's consciousness. Nice.
Comment Written 15-May-2021
reply by the author on 15-May-2021
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Hi Bill, Hope I painted a pretty picture in your mind's eye! Thank you for the great review! :o) Helvi
Comment from Wendy G
This is a stunning photo! And a beautiful 5-7-5 to accompany it! Colourful, sensual, lyrical and well written. Good wishes for your entry in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-May-2021
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This is a stunning photo! And a beautiful 5-7-5 to accompany it! Colourful, sensual, lyrical and well written. Good wishes for your entry in the contest.
Comment Written 14-May-2021
reply by the author on 15-May-2021
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Hi Wendy, Thank you for the great comments for both image and poem. I'm glad you enjoyed the whole package. Appreciate your wishes for the contest too! :o)
Comment from Bonnie Seach
Beautiful artwork and colour scheme. The warmth of the setting sun tingles at the end of day. Twilight brings peace in a setting such as depicted in this poem. No problems here. Best wishes
reply by the author on 15-May-2021
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Beautiful artwork and colour scheme. The warmth of the setting sun tingles at the end of day. Twilight brings peace in a setting such as depicted in this poem. No problems here. Best wishes
Comment Written 14-May-2021
reply by the author on 15-May-2021
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Hi Bonnie, So happy you enjoyed both image and poem. Thanks for the great review! :o)
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May you have success. Best wishes
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May you have success. Best wishes
Comment from mobileliz
every word is needed and yet no words are missing, it paints a beautiful picture of what the setting sun actually looks like. the picture has too much blue for my personal taste, but it's still an accurate choice
reply by the author on 15-May-2021
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every word is needed and yet no words are missing, it paints a beautiful picture of what the setting sun actually looks like. the picture has too much blue for my personal taste, but it's still an accurate choice
Comment Written 14-May-2021
reply by the author on 15-May-2021
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Hi Liz, I'm thrilled you felt my words painted a lovely picture of a sunset. Sorry you didn't like the image that went with the words. Thanks for the great review! :o)
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You're welcome, but no apology needed. The pic was accurate, just not my personal preference. Have a great day
Comment from Dr. Nad
Luminous Horizon Is a nice entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt. You have chosen an absolutely marvelous picture to demonstrate the beauty of nature and your profound understanding of it. Thanks for sharing, embrace the love.
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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Luminous Horizon Is a nice entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt. You have chosen an absolutely marvelous picture to demonstrate the beauty of nature and your profound understanding of it. Thanks for sharing, embrace the love.
Comment Written 13-May-2021
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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Hi Dr. Nad, Thank you for your compliments on both the 5-7-5 writing prompt and the image. Both were created by me. :o)
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It was my pleasure to read and privilege to review.
Comment from equestrik
This is a beautiful picture which you have chosen to use to accentuate your write. It is indeed a beautiful time of day. All the best to you in the 5-7-5 writing contest.
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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This is a beautiful picture which you have chosen to use to accentuate your write. It is indeed a beautiful time of day. All the best to you in the 5-7-5 writing contest.
Comment Written 13-May-2021
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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Hi equestrik. Both picture and poem were created by me. Thank you for the great review! :o)
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you are welcome.
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Perfect for the 5-7-5 writing prompt! EXCELLENT poem!
The words flowed nicely together throughout the piece;-)
Thank you for sharing and many blessings to you and your;-)
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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Perfect for the 5-7-5 writing prompt! EXCELLENT poem!
The words flowed nicely together throughout the piece;-)
Thank you for sharing and many blessings to you and your;-)
Comment Written 13-May-2021
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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Hi Melodie, Thank you for the great review of my poem. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :o)
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;-)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author. Good job with the syllable count per line--it's correct. The image is a great pairing, too. This reminds me of the spilt second when the sun is going down and there may be a green flash visible. You are right about that time just before twilight as you state it poetically. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author. Good job with the syllable count per line--it's correct. The image is a great pairing, too. This reminds me of the spilt second when the sun is going down and there may be a green flash visible. You are right about that time just before twilight as you state it poetically. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 13-May-2021
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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Hi Jan, Thank you so much for your lovely review! Love those beautiful sunsets. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem about it. :o)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An ambient write and I love twilight, that transition is momentary and filled with expectation either at dawn or dusk, much enjoyed, you captured the moment here, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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An ambient write and I love twilight, that transition is momentary and filled with expectation either at dawn or dusk, much enjoyed, you captured the moment here, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 13-May-2021
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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Hi Dolly, I tried to find just the right words to capture the moment. I'm glad you enjoyed them. Thanks for the great review! :o)
